Product Marketing and Copywriting for early-stage startup by Beatrice LazzariProduct Marketing and Copywriting for early-stage startup by Beatrice Lazzari
Product Marketing and Copywriting for early-stage startup
Led brand positioning, narrative strategy, onboarding redesign, offer architecture and competitive analysis for a UK-based financial planning platform. Reframed the product from a feature-heavy projection tool into a guided, educational experience focused on fast insight, trust and long-term decision clarity. Built the messaging foundation for launch, defined the Founder strategy, and aligned product flow with conversion goals.
Brand Strategy & Positioning
Defined the core positioning as a UK-focused financial education tool, not financial advice
Clarified regulatory boundaries and aligned all messaging with “inform, not advise”
Articulated the core problem: helping users understand what their finances could look like in 5, 10, 20 years or at retirement
Defined target audience segments by life stage and decision type
Identified emotional blockers: trust, fear of negative outcomes, complexity
Established differentiation pillars: UK-centric, whole-of-life planning, educational framing
Narrative & Messaging Architecture
Rewrote the landing page narrative from feature-led to question-led and outcome-led
Structured messaging around real-life financial questions such as retirement timing, rent vs buy and saving rate impact
Built a consistent educational tone aligned with brand guardrails
Developed a clear What this is / What this is not framework to prevent mispositioning
Integrated trust messaging directly into the value proposition, including privacy, no bank login and encryption
Onboarding & UX Strategy
Audited the 17-step profile setup and identified friction caused by perceived workload
Reframed onboarding from a long form into a guided learning journey
Proposed restructuring 17 steps into 5 visible phases to reduce cognitive load
Shifted the strategy from “complete profile first” to “see projections fast, refine later”
Recommended positioning Projections as the product starting point rather than a reward
Defined success state: user sees meaningful output within minutes