Presentation Deck Analysis by Dave PennyPresentation Deck Analysis by Dave Penny

Presentation Deck Analysis

Dave Penny

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Presentation Deck Analysis
Presentation Deck Analysis

The Work

Contra Labs needed AI-generated presentation decks evaluated by someone who could judge them the way a real client would. Sixty-three decks across twenty-one distinct creative briefs, each scored and critiqued against five dimensions: preference, effectiveness, content quality, narrative quality, and visual design.
Fixed scope, fixed deadline, delivered on schedule.

The Method

Dimension-based scoring Each output assessed only on the dimensions genuinely relevant to it, rather than forcing every deck through an identical rubric. A pitch deck and an internal update fail in different ways and should not be measured the same way.
Source verification Every output checked line by line against the brief that produced it. Required content, structure, tone, word counts, named requirements, stated figures. Most evaluation stops at whether something looks good. The more useful question is whether it did what was actually asked.
Written critique Strengths and weaknesses for every output, cited specifically: slide numbers, exact phrases, precise design terminology. Written to be read by both technical and non-technical stakeholders, so the design language is there when it earns its place and explained when it does not.

What AI Actually Gets Wrong

The recurring failure patterns turned out to be more valuable than the scores. Across sixty-three decks the same tells kept surfacing:
Fabricated statistics presented as fact, formatted confidently enough to survive a casual read
Internally inconsistent naming, the same product called two different things inside one deck
Formulaic phrasing patterns, including a distinctive over-reliance on em dash constructions
Unrequested scope invention, slides answering questions nobody asked
Structural padding that fills a deck without advancing its argument
Rendering errors that stay invisible unless you compare the output against the original prompt
That list is the real deliverable. Scores tell a team where they are. Failure patterns tell them what to fix.

Why A Designer Was The Right Reviewer

Judging a deck means judging typography, alignment, colour relationships and information hierarchy, and then judging whether any of it actually serves the argument. Twenty years of doing that work by hand is the difference between "slide four feels cluttered" and naming exactly which hierarchy decision broke and why.
Catching a fabricated statistic needs rigour. Catching a deck that is well built and still not persuasive needs a designer.

A Note On What Is Shown

This engagement is covered by an NDA, so no deck content, brief material or client output appears here. The methodology above is my own and is described in general terms only.
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What the client had to say

Great collaboration with Dave! He is reliable and delivered very high quality work quickly. Would collaborate again - thank you for contributing to our project!

Alli Minetti Labs, Contra Labs

Aug 31, 2026, Client

Posted Sep 10, 2026

Scored and critiqued 63 AI-generated slide decks across 21 briefs on design, content, and narrative quality, delivering feedback to guide model improvements.