I edited a sales script for a California equestrian ranch

Dan Hays

Copy Editor
Script Writer
Sales-Driven Marketing

I had written a number of scripts for this client, a California real estate agent who specializes in ranch properties. They had written a basic script, and asked if I could enhance and supplement the script to properly tell the story about the best features of the ranch. She provided me with some notes and the MLS listing for the property. The voiceover artist was going to be a Sam Elliott type, and it was important to write the script in a folksy and Western tone.

Her comments after I provided this script:

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ "We have worked with Dan on several jobs. He is always very professional and helpful with my less than ideal technological skills. He is definitely an expert in his field. Always a pleasure to work with. Our other team members have also commented on Dan's overall excellence! Will hire Dan again and again!"

Reche Canyon Equestrian Estate Ranch

Your equestrian oasis awaits at Reche Canyon Ranch.

This one-of-a-kind estate is nestled in Riverside County, in the heart of ranches and open spaces.

The ranch is only one and a quarter hours east of downtown Los Angeles, and only minutes away from Interstate 10 and 60.  

The property is specially set up to accommodate the magnificence that is - the Clydesdale.

From the top of the hill, you have a panoramic 360 degree view, where on a clear day, far in the distance, you can see Mount Baldy and Big Bear Mountain.

As you look down at the ranch, awaken your vision of a long-held dream - a place to call home for you and your family.

This unique property is the fulfillment of an equestrian lover’s vision, where boarding, breeding and training can thrive and prosper.

The Upper Ranch sits on 9.95 acres, where you can relax in the comfortable, spacious and modern home.

The house features a family room, a luxurious master bedroom, three additional bedrooms, three bathrooms and a large covered porch with outdoor barbeque.

Next to the house sits the greenhouse and built-in swimming pool with amazing views in every direction.

Nearby is the 10-stall barn, complete with tack room set up for Clydesdales, paddocks, an automated hot walker, and an office.

This magnificent property is fully fenced, and features a lighted 120 x 300 outdoor arena well suited for training and events. 

On a lush 25 acres sits the Lower Ranch, with its numerous turn-out areas and a 1 mile riding course.

Saddle up your horse, and live out your true calling as you explore the open areas of the 35 acres. 

This is indeed a premier equestrian estate, where many Clydesdales have been housed, shown, and won best-in-show awards. 

Now you can build on the rich legacy of Reche Canyon.

There is room to expand the facility and make it yours.  

Create your own special vision on this beautiful property.

You and your horses will love this oasis.

Come to - Reche Canyon.

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