Bhaskar Tiwary
Presentation Designer & Framer Builder
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Presentation Exercise #2
This slide comes from a real startup pitch deck.
The headline is strong.
The data is strong.
The story is strong.
But here's the question:
If you only had 3 seconds to understand the slide...
where would your eyes go first?
👀 The headline?
👀 The 0.8% → 4.9%...
Quick presentation test:
Blur your slide.
Can you still tell what's important?
If everything attracts attention, nothing attracts attention.
Visual hierarchy isn't decoration.
It's how we tell the audience where to look first.
Same data.
Different hierarchy.
Different outcome.
Which slide communicates the message faster?
2 voted
40%
3 voted
60%
5 votes
Closed
Same Q3 business data.
Two different presentation approaches.
Slide A gives stakeholders the full picture:
Multiple metrics
Supporting KPIs
Detailed context
Slide B focuses on a single business takeaway:
One insight
One recommendation
One story
If you were presenting this in an executive...
2 voted
29%
5 voted
71%
7 votes
Closed
Most presentation problems aren't design problems.
They're prioritization problems.
When I redesign a slide, I don't start with colors, icons, or animations.
I start with one question:
"What is the audience supposed to remember?"
If a slide contains five competing messages, the...
Built a study retention tracker in Framer.
The goal is to help students remember what they study instead of just tracking study hours.
I'd love feedback on:
First impression
Clarity of the value proposition
Missing features
UX improvements
