I will line edit creative writing
Dan Hays
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Summary
Sometimes you need a "second set of eyes" to bring out the best in your work. I reviewed a screenplay for a writer, and he said:
"As a professional screenwriter, I know that even the best writer has blind spots. What I need is feedback representative of an actual audience, rather than the hyper-sophisticated opinions of professional critics. If this is also what you need, I highly recommend Dan. He does not disappoint."
FAQs
Do you use Track Changes?
Yes I do. I do all my editing using Track Changes. When I deliver the content, I first deliver the version with the changes marked. I also deliver a second file, with all the changes accepted, so you can have a clean read of the content, to see how it works for you.
Do you provide critiques?
Yes, I can provide a critique of your work, indicating areas which need strengthening or enhancement, as well as comments on the overall strength of the writing.
How do you provide feedback?
I use Track Changes, so I add comments directly at the point of the needed change. But for areas where we need more feedback, I've found it is more helpful to generate a Word document, where I can more thoroughly discuss the issues, and suggest possible resolutions.
How many times will you review content as part of your editing?
I typically make three to four editing passes. The first is to correct basic errors, and get a sense of what the document is trying to say. I make a second pass to improve the clarity of sentences, making the content more active and engaging. I then edit to see how it all flows together.
Do you look for areas of my content that can be enhanced?
Yes I do. I worked with a writer who had a story she wanted to submit to a flash fiction contest. She had pared down the story for the contest requirements, and it hurt the flow of the story. I encouraged her to add back key elements, and her story was much stronger with those additions.
Are you a tough editor for new writers?
Not at all. I don't believe putting down creative efforts enhances the process in any way. I provide gentle direction and accompany it with encouragement.
What makes you good at this type of editing?
I have extensive promotional writing experience in a variety of fields. I also have a Marketing Degree and an MBA, and many years of experience in the business world. I bring all of that expertise to finding the best way to feature your content. I take pride in delivering an excellent product.
What's included
I will help you bring out the best in your creative work!
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ "Dan really listened to the specifics of the request, which was appreciated. I needed my characters strengthened and a better build up was needed to create a good pay off for the ending. He accomplished this with pinpointed, incisive editing which is what I wanted. Communication was easy and fun. Thanks Dan!" ______________ You've written a great story. But you know it could be improved. Have you looked at your own words for so long, you cant tell what needs to be fixed? I get it I've been there! I wrote a 50,000 word memoir manuscript, and after review, my New York editor suggested we cut the last 30 pages. I was shocked but she was right. I cut those last 30 pages, and the book ended at a very powerful moment. Allow me to provide the "second set of eyes" for your story! I have published two books, written over 700 articles, and have edited many blog articles. ___________________ Satisfied customers say: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ "Very Professional to work with. Highly recommended. And Very Fast Delivery!" ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ "Very quick turn around. Professional edits!"
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