Quick story:
Michelle is a coaching specialist who helps women with marriage difficulties and offers strategy calls to hear her customer's stories and give advice based on their situations. Here are 4 sales pages I wrote along which the 4 Facebook ads (you can check the ads here).
She already has an existing sales page, however, she needs her sales page a fresh new look so I helped her write a new one with 4 different versions.
Honestly, when I hear the offer I was a bit confused. Tons of questions appeared in my head: "Why should she need up to 4 sales pages? For the same product? Should I just write one and re-word the rest? Should I come up with the same content for every single one of them?"
Then I made this decision: I won't re-word it, it's a waste of time. Rather, I'll choose only ONE feature from the product and focus on it in each ad.
Here's what I mean: Rather than saying she can help her customer with everything in a relationship and squeeze all the information of what she provides, I rather only pick ONE thing she offers and focus entirely on it in each ad. Other features only appear a tiny bit.
Each copy will have different ideas. For example, sales page #1 is getting attention from their husband, sales page #2 is staying attractive, and so on.
So here's the outcome:
Name: Michelle.
Product: Coaching Meeting.
Target customer: Women aged 35 to 65+ willing to save their marriage.
Sales page #1:
How To Always Get Your Husband’s Attention in a Long-term Relationship
This 45-minute call will help you save your marriage and live in a happy & long relationship
Book Your Call Now To Know the Secrets!
Hi there,
If you have been married for a while, and your husband doesn’t look at you the way he did anymore, keep reading this.
Women now tend to lost their attractiveness through times: they get older, their appearance went down, and what’s more, there is no connection between the two.
In this call, I’m going to share with you the secret to making your husband constantly obsessed with you, despite your age and appearance.
Here is a glimpse of what you’ll discover:
☑ I’ll give personal advice based on your situation - the one that you may NOT find anywhere on the Internet.
☑ Some recommendations of what you should do to save your marriage.
☑ The proven formula that always works - My past clients already used it with 100% success.
…and much much more!
Girls, don’t miss this chance to have a truly happy marriage!
Book Your Call Now To Secure Your Call!
Sales page #2:
Here’s How I Stay Attractive to My Husband for xx Years (And How You Can, Too)
Yes! I want to know how to stay attractive
throughout my lifelong marriage!
Hey there,
Looking for a way to attract your husband after a long time being in the relationship?
Well, the strategy is pretty simple. (I’ll show it to you later)
But to make the strategy actually work, you’ll need a coach guiding you along the way to teach you the techniques based on your personal situation.
And that’s why I’m inviting you to my 45-minute 1:1 Zoom call.
I’ll tell you my best advice to maintaining your attractiveness throughout your lifetime marriage.
There’s nothing to do about beauty or appearance
Nor wealth, status, capital, education, etc.
Apart from that, I’ll tell you everything you need to know to save your marriage despite every situation.
Book Our Call NOW To Be A Forever Attractive Wife!
Yes! I want to know how to stay attractive
throughout my lifelong marriage!
Sales page #3:
I Will Come Up With A Step-By-Step Plan To Save Your Marriage
Yes! I want to get my step-by-step plan to save my relationship!
So…your marriage didn’t work out right lately? And your relationship hasn’t been doing well?
I’ve got a plan for you - A plan that is designed detailedly and performed successfully for my past clients.
It’s totally different from the tips & tricks from the blog posts and Youtube videos you see on the Internet.
They are more personalized, more effective, and more practical.
Because I’m going to spend 45 minutes listening to your story and show you what EXACTLY you need to do.
Jump On a Zoom Call with Me NOW to Secure Your Step-By-Step Plan to Save your Lifetime Marriage!
Sales page #4:
The Secret Formula To Be An Strong & Attractive Wife
Yes! I’m Going to Book A Call With You to Know
The Secret Formula!
Hey there,
Do you want to know the secret to being a strong, powerful, attractive, and most importantly, a loved wife?
It’s not putting a bunch of expensive makeup
It’s not changing your hairstyle
It’s not buying new clothes
Rather, it’s changing your mindset and actions in a scientifically and effective way.
And that’s when my formula comes in.
In the past, I’ve had a lot of clients approach me and ask for advice about their marriage
They are either heartbroken, losing attractiveness, or have no connection or sympathy with their partner.
Every time I gave them my secret formula, it always works.
Many of my clients saved their marriage from the brink of divorce, and their marriage life significantly improved
Book Your Personal 45-minute Call Now
To Know The Secret Formula That Helped Thousands of People Saved Their Marriage.