Boba Tale is a cozy shop-management game where players run a boba café in a kawaii world.
However, the game launched without onboarding, leaving new players unsure how to play and causing early drop-off.
I designed a structured onboarding experience to teach core mechanics, build player confidence, and support early retention—while preserving the game’s playful tone.
The Challenge
No Early Guidance
New players lacked direction and often quit before completing their first successful order.
Unclear Upgrade Value
Without early explanation, players didn’t understand how upgrades or IAPs supported progression.
Tone Constraints
Any tutorial needed to teach quickly without disrupting the game’s charm or pacing.
Tutorial
Game Play
My UX Writing Approach
Mapped the First-Session Experience
Identified confusion points from launch to first completed order
Determined when to introduce mechanics versus when to step back
Designed Guided Microcopy
Wrote concise, encouraging tutorial text that explained actions in context
Avoided long explanations in favor of short, actionable prompts
Built Trust Through Tone
Used a warm, friendly voice aligned with the kawaii aesthetic
Reinforced progress with positive feedback instead of corrective language
Implemented Lightweight Onboarding Patterns
Broke guidance into micro-interactions
Used repeatable tooltips instead of one-time information dumps
Ensured messages were quick, relevant, and visually unobtrusive
Projected Outcomes
This onboarding approach reflects patterns commonly used in successful mobile management games and is expected to:
Increase tutorial completion rates
Improve early-session retention
Help players recognize upgrade value before purchase prompts
Why It Matters
Effective onboarding supports both player confidence and business goals.
By teaching systems gradually and reinforcing progress, UX writing can reduce churn without slowing gameplay.
Reflection
I created this project to explore how tone, pacing, and reward design influence first-session engagement.
It reminded me that onboarding isn’t just the start of gameplay — it’s the start of a relationship.