As you can see I have identified some flaws above. I reimagined the whole thing. Shire's vision, their customers, their main services, what they want the public to feel, etc. My target was to create something memorable which has great marketing potential. So, I created a shape that has a hidden connection with development and marketing, used an energetic and popping color to grab public attention, a font that is bold and looks serious and professional. The logo can be easily memorable through proper marketing.