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Every time I’d hand my pages over to friends, the first thing I would do is watch their faces. I’d gauge their reactions to my scenes, to see if they were as impactful as they were in my head.
I was looking for raised eyebrows, the excitement of parted lips. I had something, I knew I had something because these were scenes my mind would not let go of. I’d go to sleep dreaming of them, where they played out so vividly in my head.
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Factual and bland writing often shows up as, “Miranda walked into the room and it was cold.”
A statement void of detail, is brief, and doesn’t resonate with the reader.
But don’t worry! Not all is lost if your writing looks like that.
There’s a way to flavor it up and make the reader feel how cold the room was, rather than telling them.
In Module 4 of my course, Notes to Novel, we touch upon Show, Don’t Tell and how to up the ante in your writing to bring it to its fullest potential.
I’ve decided to offer this sample of my course as a live workshop that better helps writers on their mission to write the story of their dreams!
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What You’ll Learn in A Writer’s Mission: Description:
What telling in writing is.
What telling words are and how frequently to use them.
How to make your writing pop with the power of vivid description and evoking emotion that will make your reader feel they’re there.
How show, don’t tell encompasses ALL aspects of your writing.
How to find balance in your writing.
Together, we’ll conduct an exercise on how to enhance a scene by taking it from telling to showing.
And at the end, there will be a live Q & A with me to ask all of your Show, Don’t Tell and writing-related questions!
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“I had a TON of ideas for a story but no idea what to do with them. I write fantasy so I usually get consumed in world-building or creating cool magic systems, but all that doesn't make a story. And it can actually get quite overwhelming. Savannah helped me cut through the noise and focus on what was most important in my story and I finished my first 100,000-word draft! So excited!"
–Laura Michaels
Hi! I’m Savannah!
I am an accredited developmental editor and book coach, and also the host of the podcast, Fiction Writing Made Easy. I started this journey because I wanted to learn how to write my own book. Yet…the more I delved into the art of storytelling, I absolutely fell in love with it.
My mission is to help writers overcome the trials that I encountered. Because surely, if I was feeling it, others must have as well! I’m excited to assist you along this beautiful journey, starting a draft, finishing a draft, editing your manuscript, or embarking on the publishing process. Wherever you are, I’m there with you every step of the way!
With over five years of experience, I have supported hundreds of writers in finding their way in the novel writing process. So, I have seen it all!
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Take your writing from factual to expressive by participating in my live workshop at NO COST to you on Wednesday, June 12, 2024 from 12:00 - 2:00 PM PT via Zoom. Bring your imagination, pens, paper, and something refreshing!
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Landing Page Launch: 06/05/24
Workshop Launch: 06/12/24
Doors Open for Notes to Novel: 06/19/24
Doors Close for Notes to Novel: 06/26/24
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Secondary Goal: Get whitelisted so future emails won’t go to spam.
Angle: Promote free workshop.
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Meta description: Thank you for signing up for the Show, Don’t Tell workshop.
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Subject Line B: Here’s What’s Stopping You, [Name], From Writing a Story That Tears Up the Page!
Subject Line C: [Name], Do You Accept The Mission?
Subject Line D: Writing That Killer Scene Is At Your Fingertips!
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Welcome, [First Name]!
Thank you so much for signing up for A Writer’s Mission: Description!
By accepting the mission, you will develop your skill to spin all those bland telling words into a scene that flourishes with rich description.
And 100%, [First Name], I can help you get there!
Show, Don’t Tell is one of the most common problems that pesters writers. And while there is no right or wrong way to write that fantastic first draft of yours, readers now more than ever want to:
Connect.
Immerse themselves into the world you’re creating.
Empathize and fall in love with your characters.
Feel that pull that they are going on an emotional journey…
And one of the main ways to achieve that is by detail and description! I decided to offer this free live workshop to help writers achieve their goals of writing their book. Because I can tell you now, I’ve been where you are. The struggle is real.
Having trouble translating those emotions and scenes into your work? I’ve got you!
Overwhelmed? Totally normal!
We’ll spend time doing exercises that will evoke all kinds of emotions to get those creative juices flowing!
[First Name], I cannot begin to tell you how excited I am that you’re here!
And of course, at the end, we'll have a Live Q & A for any questions from our time together. I want you to feel good with what you've accomplished when we depart.
[First Name], you’ve got this!
Can’t wait to see you! And until my next email, if you’re interested, be sure to check out my public podcast, Fiction Writing Made Easy! Where you can find many of my writer’s tips, and thoughts. Fiction Writing Made Easy can be found on Apple Podcasts, Spotify, etc.!
Or check out my blog!
Stay tuned for the Zoom link that will provide access to our live workshop!
Looking forward to seeing you!
Savannah Gilbo
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Secondary Goal: Consume the free content you’re providing.
Angle: Empathize with your prospect by addressing their pain while offering the benefits of being part of the community.
Send: Friday, June 07, 2024
Meta description: I understand the frustration of getting stuck…
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Subject Line A: When the words just won’t come…
Subject Line B: When your writing tells more than it shows.
Subject Line C: [First Name], are you ready to give up on your writing?
Subject Line D: Believe me, I understand…
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Hey, [First Name]!
There is nothing worse than feeling bogged down by what you’re writing – or worse, what you’re NOT writing.
Am I right?
That frozen sensation of sitting at your desk, staring at the same sentence over and over again. You simply cannot think of ways to expand upon particular sentences:
Marybeth was upset over the loss of her glasses.
Frustrating.
Chessy wanted to find solace in Brad’s arms.
How do you express solace?
And it’s absolutely killing your productivity.
It’s enough to make a writer want to give up if they can’t make it work. Because I’m sure you wonder, What’s the point? If you can’t figure it out. You have so many plans for this book that just won’t come together the way you want it to.
And the last thing you want is to feel any form of disillusionment about writing.
I’m here to tell you that you can figure it out. And you are more than capable of putting the pieces together!
You’re receiving this email because you’re not ready to give up. You want to find that sweet spot solution that will just make it make sense.
Together, we’re going to identify and conquer!
Stay tuned to learn more!
We are less than a week away from your mission!
Till Next Time!
Savannah
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Meta description: Looking for a writing community where you feel you belong? Look no further!
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Subject Line A: My Mission Brings All The Writers To The Yard.
Subject Line B: [First Name], Are You Joining Me Tomorrow?
Subject Line C: Your Words Deserve This, [First Name].
Subject Line D: The Mission Is Tomorrow, [First Name]!
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Hey, [First Name]!
I can’t believe our workshop is tomorrow!!
Did you know that I wanted to write my own book? Yes! Just like you, I wanted to take readers on a fantastical journey they were going to fall in love with because I fell in love with it.
Storytelling, and how to write a novel, sadly, is not something they teach you in school. I had to learn from the ground up on how to craft an outline, where to start, the art of storytelling, and push through the messy middle…
Overcome the personal hurdles of mindset and so much more…
The more I embarked on this part of my journey, I became engrossed.
Then something hit me…
The difficulties I faced in my own journey, surely, other writers must have faced, that ultimately led them to give up on their ideas and their works.
The abandoned first drafts.
Stories that could have been someone’s favorite that they’ll never get to read.
Characters they’ll never get to know and connect with.
Truthfully, [First Name], while that’s sad to think of, it’s true.
I wanted to make a difference in the lives of writers. That’s why I became a developmental editor and book coach.
Writing a book isn’t so complex. Many writers become overwhelmed because they overthink and over complicate the process.
My mission is to educate writers on how to edit and publish stories that they feel proud of without the doubt, frustration, and overwhelm that stops most in their tracks.
My goal is to help every writer develop the confidence to share their message with the world. Because making the decision to put your mind, your thoughts, and your creativity to the page is one of the bravest things I know. And I want to encourage that, as well as celebrate it.
That’s why I want to lead with kindness, and truthful feedback. With bravery, [First Name], comes facing some scary realities–sharing your work, for one. But worry not! That’s how we grow. And you’ll be among a community with like minded people who are there to share the same goal.
And with all of this in mind and put into practice, I’ve helped hundreds of authors achieve their dreams. Bringing a little glimmer into this world that otherwise may not have been.
That’s why I’m offering this free Show, Don’t Tell workshop, [First Name]. I can’t wait to meet you tomorrow and help bring all of your visions to the page exactly the way you pictured them.
Here is the Zoom link for tomorrow’s workshop!
Can’t make it? No worries! The recording will be available for 72 hours after the workshop!
See you at 12:00PM PT!
Savannah
P.S. Whitelist Savannah Gilbo LLC by adding me to your contact list so you never miss an email!
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Send: Thursday, June 13, 2024
Meta description: If you liked A Writer’s Mission: Description, then you’ll love its origin course, Notes to Novel.
Subject Line Options:
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Subject Line B: If You Enjoyed Mission Description…
Subject Line C: Is There More, You Ask?
Subject Line D: Now That the Mission is Over…
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Hi, [First Name]!
Did you have as much fun as I did???
That’s the goal–to learn a fantastic writing skill and have fun doing it!
By now, you know:
The difference between show vs. tell.
What telling words are and how frequently to use them.
How to balance your writing to not overwhelm the scene while embedding it with that rich, decadent description and emotions.
How Show, Don’t Tell encompasses ALL aspects of your writing.
My favorite part? It was seeing all of your creativity come alive in the Show, Don’t Tell exercise!
Hopefully now you feel a little more comfortable, and have begun to build confidence in your abilities!
If you missed the live workshop, no worries! You can find the recording here, where it’ll be up for the next day or so!
But did you know that A Writer’s Mission: Description actually comes from Module 4 of my course, Notes to Novel?
Yes!
A Writer’s Mission: Description is a snippet – a teaser of what you can expect from my course that’s for writers who:
Want to write the first draft of their novel.
Are facing some serious self-doubt, and are overwhelmed by all of the vague answers out there on the internet.
Have a current WIP they’re stuck on.
Have a fleshed out manuscript and want to improve on it!
And, [First Name], I’m excited to let you know that doors are opening soon!
Did you also know that many writers who work with me have gone onto publishing their works both traditionally and independently?
I’d love to introduce you to Preslaysa Williams
Preslaysa is the author of following titles:
A Sweet Lowcountry Proposal
A Lowcountry Bride
Here’s what she had to say:
"As a result of Savannah’s stellar coaching, I landed a book contract with Avon/HarperCollins!"
"Savannah is a great coach! She has an amazing sense of story, and it shows in the way she coaches writers. My favorite part of working with Savannah was the weekly call where I could discuss my work and brainstorm any necessary changes or tweaks to my current draft. I recommend working with a book coach because it’s a great way to learn the craft of storytelling quickly without having to spend years toiling at it alone. As a result of Savannah’s stellar coaching, I landed a book contract with Avon/HarperCollins!"
Isn’t that incredible?? Not only did I have an amazing time with Preslaysa, but she landed a contract with Avon/HarperCollins!
This is the reason why I became a coach, [First Name], to help writers achieve their goals and dreams. Their happiness, watching their self-esteem and confidence skyrocket! That’s what it’s all about.
I can help you, too, [First Name].
A Writer’s Mission: Description is much the same as what you can expect in Notes to Novel. The same energy, the same fun, and the rewarding sense of accomplishment when you not only finish the course, but also the first draft of your manuscript.
Interested?
Click here to be directed to when doors open!
I can’t wait to be there for you every chapter.
Till then!
Savannah
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Send: Wednesday, June 19, 2024
Meta description: Doors are open!
Subject Line Options:
Subject Line A: Ready to Get a Grip on Your Pen, [First Name]?
Subject Line B: Doors Are Open to Notes to Novel TODAY!
Subject Line C: Give That Rough First Draft the Love it Needs…
Subject Line D: Over the Overwhelm, [First Name]? Doors Are Open to Notes to Novel!
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[First Name]! Doors for Notes to Novel are officially open!
Trust me, this is cause for celebration!
You know what else is? The fact that you want to write a novel!! How cool is that?
Together, we’ll spend eight weeks learning the fundamentals of how to write a novel in a comprehensive, step-by-step, fun and engaging course that’ll transform all of the ideas in your head and your notebooks into a novel that works!
I’ve dedicated all of my resources collected from every client I’ve ever had to put together a course for:
The brand new writer who has dreams, notions, ideas, and isn’t sure what to do with them or how to piece them together. Who isn’t afraid of putting in the work, and wants to see their words evolve into sentences, that collect into paragraphs, and reach their final form of a thick manuscript.
The writer who has tried this all before and has reached the fork of uncertainty. Who might have an outline that isn’t working, has been stuck on that same chapter for what feels like forever, or has finished their manuscript and overall just isn’t feeling it.
The seasoned writer who is looking for a fresh and new way to spruce up what they’ve got to make future works even better!
[First Name], I’m sure you’re saying to yourself, “But Savannah…I want to, but writing a novel seems like...a lot…”
Writing a novel feels like a lot to those who just don’t know. When we break it down step-by-step, it’s not so scary and entirely doable! And there is a whole module dedicated to Mindset!
And that’s exactly what Notes to Novel is all about.
Step-by-step breakdowns.
Encouragement for success.
Having fun for the love of writing.
Want a sneak peek of what’s inside?
Live calls & Q&A so we’ll spend all eight weeks together!
30 lessons across 6 modules packed with useful information.
A sense of community in our Private Student’s-Only Facebook Group.
More content outside of my public podcast in a Private Notes to Novel Podcast.
Worksheets, cheatsheets, checklists.
Bonuses and more!
Interested? Click here to learn more!
But just so you know, [First Name], doors for Notes to Novel are only open for 7 days!
All the best!
Savannah
P.S. Let’s connect on social media! Follow me on Instagram, Facebook, and check out my podcast, Fiction Writing Made Easy for more fun and informative writing-related topics!
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Secondary Goal: Interest. Prospects should start to feel like the product is for them.
Angle: Share the benefits and what the product can do for your prospects. Use some scarcity.
Send: Thursday, June 20, 2024
Meta description: What Notes to Novel Can Do For You
Subject Line Options:
Subject Line A: Make Those Minutes Count, [First Name]...
Subject Line B: Own Your Writing Power.
Subject Line C: Noteworthy Modules are Waiting For You!
Subject Line D: Annoyed with Playing Where’s Waldo Looking For Answers?
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Hi, [First Name]!
I’m sure you’ve tried absolutely everything on how to write your story. The reference books in bookstores, scoured Amazon and Ebay for great deals only to still come up confused. Searched and searched online only to find vague explanations and roundabout answers that do nothing for you in the end.
Let’s just say it, there is far too much out there.
Inconsistent answers.
Contrasting takes on how they approach things.
I want to tell you why Notes to Novel is different, why you’ve found me and are probably using your last chance on me before throwing in the pages altogether in the trash can.
With Notes to Novel, you can say bye-bye to imposter syndrome that affects more than 80% of writers. Work through the fears that hold you back, the overwhelm that keeps your shaking fingers hovering over your keyboard…
Find clarity amid the fog, confidence to persevere, knowledge that will stay with you, support from a community that cares, and learning to trust yourself…
Imagine all of the answers you’ve been endlessly searching for all in one place: genre, story themes, crafting relatable characters, designing unforgettable words that just may become a reader’s new go-to literary getaway, writing strong, engaging scenes…
All the while building an adaptable and well-rounded outline that you can use with every new idea that you want to explore.
As a writer, you’ll fall in love with your words and your ideas.
And this isn’t just for new writers, [First Name], this is for any writer with an idea. At any place, at any level. My doors are open to embrace those who really want to make their dreams come alive.
Which is why I’m telling you that you shouldn’t wait.
Because writers have a gift that should be nurtured, thoughts that deserve a say, and words that can make a difference.
Words have that kind of power, [First Name]. Own your power by enrolling in Notes to Novel today before my doors close!
Till Next Time!
Savannah
P.S. Let’s connect on social media! Follow me on Instagram, Facebook, and check out my podcast, Fiction Writing Made Easy for more fun and informative writing-related topics!
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Subject Line B: You Put It Off…Until One Day You Never Pick It Back Up…
Subject Line C:You Need Your People, [First Name]
Subject Line D: Give Into Writer’s Wanderlust, [First Name].
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[First Name], I know how excited you are about your work.
You have this idea formulated in your mind, and you want to talk about it with anyone who will listen.
Maybe it’s that new fantasy you were hit with inspiration to write.
Or that new retelling you’ve been dying to toy with.
How about that new romance that will have readers melting in their seats?
Whatever it is, you are beyond excited to talk about it. Your eyes light up, you start talking with your hands, you bounce around plot points in excitement because there are so many ideas bubbling in your mind all looking to come out at once, and you don’t even know where to start!
Until someone, one day, throws you off by scoffing, rolling their eyes, or appearing disinterested. That’s enough to show that someone isn’t as happy for you as you think. They don’t want to hear you.
If that sounds like you, [First Name], or a situation you can relate to, then I’m here to tell you that those aren’t your people.
That’s enough to dim your light, and make you less inclined to bring it up. Having no support in your corner leads to some negative thoughts, like,
If they don’t care, would anyone else?
Sometimes that’s all it takes to begin the down spiral domino effect. You promise yourself you’ll take a break, maybe revisit it.
Until you don’t. You shift your current WIP into a folder with other abandoned projects you’ve promised that you’ll return to and haven’t.
[First Name], you need your people.
All the more reason I’m going to tell you that you shouldn’t wait. You don’t need any further proof that says that you need support, and a community, and the longer you wait, the more likely you are to just walk away.
And I know you don’t want that.
[First Name], it’s your time, your turn.
My doors are open now for the next 5 days to welcome you into and to get you started on the path you want to be on.
Sadly, once these doors close, you’ll have to wait months for them to open again. Why put it off? Why wait for them to open again?
A Private Facebook Group, bonus material, and coursework to get you going await you. Because this isn’t about them, it’s about you…
And you deserve to. Let Notes to Novel tell your story with your people.
Till Next Time!
Savannah
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Subject Line B: Relentlessness is Infectious, [First Name].
Subject Line C: Student Spotlight from Fiction Writing Made Easy…
Subject Line D: Proven Methods You Can See & Believe…
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Hi [First Name]!
In episode 124 of my podcast, Fiction Writing Made Easy, I hosted a student highlight from those who have taken Notes to Novel and kindly left me feedback.
And feedback is so important, [First Name]. It tells us whether or not we’re on the right track. What was a great highlight, what can be improved upon. And feedback is something that I highly encourage.
I want to introduce you to Lindsay Sfara, one of my students from Season 3.
Lindsay’s journey started with an incomplete outline. It lacked the details that mattered, and it led her on a 6 month struggle that was a constant start and stop, pausing to think of what would happen next and prevented her from writing her end.
At the end of her 6 month struggle, she decided to sign up for Notes to Novel.
“That was just such a massive, massive game changer,” Lindsay says.
“But, what really struck me in the course was the work behind discovering the WHY behind your writing and book, as well as the focus on your antagonist's development and their goals. So, starting with the why…
Going through that work and discovering the “why” behind my book was the biggest a-ha moment in discovering not just the theme for that book, but the themes for my dual protagonists, too. And that already was a huge boost in adding depth to my writing—and to the scenes on a smaller scale.
What they wanted and their actions toward getting what they wanted were what pushed my protagonists to react, and then what pushed the story on their end. So, in the end, there was this really cool cause–and—effect cycle created by… They did this, so now they react this way, et cetera, et cetera.
And that just creates flow for your story, versus dumping story events in an outline that don't relate to each other. You want the flow, and that the antagonist really helped me get to that.
So with those key things—the why and antagonist—they made it so much easier to add more detail and direction to my outline as I revamped it throughout the course. I used those two things to help fill out my key scenes and character arcs, as well as, on a smaller scale, the five commandments for each scene. And everything was just starting to fall into place after that.
If I had questions, the weekly coaching calls were perfect. And if I had new ideas to add for parts that I already drafted, the revision tracker was such a lifesaver, so that I didn't have to go back and edit, and could just keep writing forward.”
This is already such amazing feedback! But, [First Name], Lindsay’s journey gets better!
After trying to write a novel on her own for 6 grueling months, the process proving difficult, only reaching a word count of 25,000 during, and failing NaNoWriMo that year…
After signing up for Notes to Novel, and spending the next 6 months working through the course content and revamping her outline, her draft successfully reached 100,000 words, [First Name]!
What a jump!
And with NaNoWriMo just around the corner, she slayed it and by more than doubling her original writing pace within the same time frame.
I’m in awe! From 25,000 to 100,000!!
“I also feel way more confident and excited about my story. I'm way more organized with my details despite all of the moving parts I have from world-building to subplots—and I now have a drafting routine that produces an alive and organic flow for developing a story. And that's all from Notes to Novel.”
There is so much more to share from Lyndsay, [First Name]. So many golden nuggets of feedback that you can listen to and read by going to Fiction Writing Made Easy and My Blog, where you can find Lyndsay’s interview, as well as my other students, and other topics of writing interest!
Till Next Time!Savannah
P.S. Let’s connect on social media! Follow me on Instagram, Facebook for updates and other fun writing nuggets.
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Subject Line C: Next Level Writer.
Subject Line D: Evolve as A Writer and Never Go Backward
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Hey, [First Name],
You know, with just two days left until enrollment for Notes to Novel ends, I wanted to say something. Investing in ourselves is a big step.
When we choose a gym membership, or a membership to anything, really – it’s a trusting agreement that opens a pathway to better ourselves.
Investing in an eight-week course to improve your writing and learning the fundamentals of how to write a story that works with proven methods that you can use again, and again will stay with you.
You’re not just learning how to write a novel. It’s crucial to me to explain why shifting your mindset is so important. Earlier, we talked about how imposter syndrome affects over 80% of writers. Constantly comparing, not thinking we’re good writers, or our writing isn’t good enough…
You don’t deserve to go around thinking like that, [First Name]. It’s debilitating and heartbreaking because it’s not true. Shifting your mindset before getting into the thick of it will make all the difference.
This course will allow you to get to the next level as a writer. And once you get there, you will never go back.
Plus, you’ll have lifetime access to the program and all of its content and exciting bonuses so you can review whenever you’d like a refresher.
Not only that, but you’ll receive additional updates to the course and content at no cost to you!
The biggest risk is not doing this at all.
And, [First Name], if you’re honestly not happy, or you don’t feel like Notes to Novel is for you after all. If you feel this way within the first 30 days, you’re more than welcome to request for a refund. You’ll get all of your money back.
Because I want my students to be happy and to find the content helpful so they can thrive in the writing world.
But with all of the content, and we’re talking 30 lessons spanning across 6 modules, the Live Q & A, the Private Facebook Group, the FAQ library, and the bonuses, I’m confident you’ll love it, [First Name].
Click here to learn more about Notes to Novel.
Hope to see you in the program!
Savannah
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Think of it this way, [First Name]…on the eve when my doors close, I tend to think of the story of Cinderella.
In her moment of despair, her fairy godmother came to her aid and turned her rags into an elaborate gown, glass slippers, and she was unrecognizable. She had an opportunity to be among the people, and she even danced with the prince.
Of course, there was a catch. She had all of this wonder at her glass heels until the stroke of midnight.
[First Name], my doors close at 11:59PM PT. Just before the stroke of midnight.
And we all remember how it goes, right? The clock chimes heavily, Cinderella rushes down the grand staircase and leaves a slipper behind before at the last strike of the clock, her gown returns to rags, and her carriage turns back into a pumpkin. Yet, she has one glass slipper to remember that unforgettable night where she wasn’t among the ashes.
In this retelling of Cinderella, [First Name], what would you do?
Cinderella didn’t have a choice, but you do.
Do you hold onto one glass slipper after my doors have closed? Hoping for the other to show again in the future?
Or do you change the narrative and seize your opportunity by taking control of how the story is written?
Notes to Novel will help you craft that first draft exploding with potential.
Don’t let this opportunity turn back into a pumpkin, [First Name].
Enroll in Notes to Novel before 11:59PM PT!
Can’t wait to see you there!
Savannah
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Are You Near Scratching Out Your Dream to Write That Story?
Make that Dream a Reality with Notes to Novel!
An 8-Week Live Course That Will Have You Falling in Love With Your Words
It’s Been A Struggle…I Know…
You’ve been sitting at your computer, beyond frustrated that no matter how much you’ve been manifesting, the words refuse to come. The blinking cursor on the blank document is maddening.
Your thoughts are jumbled, and you’re finding it difficult to organize them. Every attempt thus far has been a failure.
You’ve searched the internet for solutions on how to format an outline but found a number of expensive courses that aren't providing you clear answers.
You’re overwhelmed and disappointed that the results are bleak, and you can’t seem to find anyone that can help you through this trying time.
You’re stressed, getting ready to close on the chapter of your life where your dream of becoming an author comes true, a strikethrough like every idea that sits in your notebook.
You keep getting stuck in the same place in your forever WIP, unable to move forward because you’re unsure how.
You’re tired and discouraged that your book will be nothing more than an unorganized compilation of notes…
And 97% Give Up
97% of people have picked up a pen, hovered their fingers over their keyboard, and at some point in the process gave up because of imposter syndrome and the seedlings of self-doubt that ultimately makes a writer believe they can’t do it, or they’re not good enough.
Many went to school to study the fundamentals of English: editing, vocabulary, technical writing, creative writing, etc. The one thing that isn’t taught is how to actually write a novel.
And that’s a shame. Because writers will then be left to take additional courses, relying on experts in the novel writing niche. Only, many of them specialize in a specific piece of the process, and play down the rest.
That 97% have invested in the reference books, scoured the internet for answers, did not have a support group to lean on, or a course to help guide them in a fun and comprehensive way that taps into all of the elements involving manuscript first drafts.
Now you’re back at it, left with no clue of what to do, where to go, and who to ask. And that leaves you with that parasitic mindset of giving up.
I implore you not to give up.
Because that means only 3% of individuals have combated the struggles, the overwhelm, the stress, and the anxieties that come with writing the first draft of a novel.
On the Flipside of This, There is a Way Into the Seemingly Exclusive 3%...
What is the secret solution that the 3% has to aid them in completing their first draft?
A way to become an innovative idea generator…
What if I were to tell you that the solution is fun and all-inclusive, unlike the books and courses you’ve invested in?
That gives you a direction and takes out the guesswork, teaching you not one area, but all areas of the novel writing adventure.
A community of like-minded writers just like you that will rally and support you along the way.
A course that will leave you feeling satisfied, and proud of what you’ve written. Because that message you’ve been craving to share with the world is worth reading…
Formula-Free and with tools to help you finally tackle and complete that x-year manuscript you’ve been in an on again/off again relationship with.
Hi! I’m Savannah!
I am an accredited developmental editor and book coach, and also the host of the podcast, Fiction Writing Made Easy. I started this journey because I wanted to learn how to write my own book. Yet…the more I delved into the art of storytelling, I absolutely fell in love with it.
My mission is to help writers overcome the trials that I encountered. Because surely, if I was feeling it, others must have as well! I’m excited to assist you along this beautiful journey, starting a draft, finishing a draft, editing your manuscript, or embarking on the publishing process. Wherever you are, I’m there with you every sentence, every chapter of the way!
With over five years of experience, I have supported hundreds of writers in finding their way when it comes to writing a novel. So I have seen it all! Sad to relay, but most writing advice to exist out there is vague, or focuses solely on one point and glosses over the rest. That’s not doing anyone any good.
I have compiled everything I’ve learned from working with each and every one of my students to introduce to you:
Notes to Novel! An eight-week live online step-by-step course that educates writers how to overcome overwhelm, self-doubt, boost up your confidence, and build your motivation through six modules, thirty lessons, live Q&A calls, and more to give you everything you need to complete the first draft of your manuscript!
<<Enroll Now>>
The best part? Many of my students have self-published their novels, or have published with traditional publishers!
Check out some of my students and their work!
Preslaysa Williams
A Sweet Lowcountry Proposal
A Lowcountry Bride
Emma Grange
Seeking Safety
Needing Normal
Marc B. DeGeorge
Origin Story Part I: The Starship Sneak
Origin Story Part II: The Reckless Rescue
Origin Story III: The Traitors Trial
Sara Ennis
The Dollhouse
In Order to Write That Great Novel, You’ll Need The Right Tools!
When You Enroll in Notes to Novel, You’ll Receive:
The Entire Notes to Novel Course!
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Module 1: Mindset – Writing Your First Draft
The most important thing, before we can take on any writing project, is understanding the way we view it. Understand our why.
Learn about mindset and how it’s important regarding writing your first draft.
The #1 reason why novels become a continual WIP.
Learn 3 strategies on how to reach “The End”.
Module 2: Genre – The Key to Writing a Novel
An introduction to genre and how it can become the guide in writing a novel that flows and meets readers’ expectations.
Learn genre’s must-have conventions, which include characters & setting.
The six scenes your story needs that will help maintain pacing and structure
Unlocking your story’s theme so it’s present.
Module 3: Crafting Your Characters & Settings
Create characters readers will grow attached to, and learn where your story will take place. You’ll explore how to further develop the genre elements you need so they are tailored to your specific story.
Learn how to flesh these characters out so they feel believable.
Strategies to help you select the best point-of-view and tense for your story.
Five tips on how to devise an alluring setting and/or world that your readers can clearly envision.
Module 4: Scenes – The Building Blocks of Story
Learn how to write organized and gripping scenes that won’t fail to enchant your reader.
Understanding “Show, Don’t Tell”.
How description makes all the difference.
How to unveil your character’s inner life.
Effectively writing exposition.
And other strategies!
Module 5: The Art of Outlining Your Novel
We’ve reached the portion of the program, where we’ll flesh out your outline!
Expand your creativity as you delve into this valuable five-step process that will make your book come alive!
Layer and weave subplots into your story in a way that feels natural.
Learn strategies that will crystalize your outline.
Module 6: Writing Forward to Finish Your Draft
We’ll discuss how to reach “The End” of your draft in a very productive way.
Gain clarity, tips, tricks, and further strategies to tie it all together so that you feel confident and motivated to write forward.
Learn how to troubleshoot common issues that you may face as you write.
How to back up and keep your documents updated as your story develops.
Worksheets, Cheat Sheets, & Checklists
Your writer’s toolbox should have the proper equipment to help support you as you move through the course. You’ll find worksheets that compliment the modules so you understand the work, cheat sheets for reference, and checklists to hold you accountable.
FAQ Library
So you always have my archive of commonly asked questions about novel writing with a simple click for when you need it.
Private Podcast
Unlike my public podcast, Fiction Writing Made Easy, you’ll receive this private podcast reserved just for my students! So you have further resources to aid you along your journey, and are available on the go! Listen on your walk, your run, in the car, or pop in those earbuds and relax.
Private Facebook Group
If you’ve been feeling like no one understands your goals and endeavors as far as writing goes, you’ll love this private Facebook group for students only! Meet dozens of other writers just like you reaching for a common goal. With the help of a community that will back you up, and help you feel seen, heard, and understood. Feel free to ask questions, discuss the modules, and get help from me and other students!
Live Q & A with Savannah Gilbo
Questions are natural as they are encouraged! You’re on your own Hero’s Journey, and you’re bound to face some head scratchers along the way. Join me once a week for eight weeks through Zoom to ask your questions, get feedback, and assistance as you advance through the writing process. The only way to become unstuck is to work it out.
"As a result of Savannah’s stellar coaching, I landed a book contract with Avon/HarperCollins!"
"Savannah is a great coach! She has an amazing sense of story, and it shows in the way she coaches writers. My favorite part of working with Savannah was the weekly call where I could discuss my work and brainstorm any necessary changes or tweaks to my current draft. I recommend working with a book coach because it’s a great way to learn the craft of storytelling quickly without having to spend years toiling at it alone. As a result of Savannah’s stellar coaching, I landed a book contract with Avon/HarperCollins!"
With Notes to Novel You Can Expect To…
Say farewell to imposter syndrome and self-doubt with a mindset that cannot be shaken so you can use this unbeatable format over and over again.
Crystalize your story’s main genre, so you know exactly who your reader is and how best to resonate with them.
Discover the theme of your story so you can craft a tale that will enchant by interlacing it into your plot, settings, and characters.
Breathe life into believable characters your readers will care about, and design settings that they’ll want to revisit not too long after turning the last page.
Become proficient in writing strong scenes that propel the story forward.
Craft an adaptable and well-rounded outline for your story that not only gives you a stellar visual but helps your progression in the novel writing process.
Achieve the confidence to complete your first draft with clarity, knowledge, self-trust, and have fun doing it!
Combat the overwhelm and fall in love with your idea and/or your story all over again.
"With Savannah’s help, I was able to finish a draft and have fun with my writing again."
"Savannah helped me to finally finish a novel that I had been working on for five years–I can’t believe it! I started writing this story multiple times but could never get past the first couple of chapters. I was constantly feeling overwhelmed, near tears, and frustrated with my lack of progress. With Savannah’s help, I was able to finish a draft and have fun with my writing again. I’m so grateful to have worked with her and would definitely recommend getting Savannah’s help if you’re feeling frustrated or having trouble making progress on your draft!
–Melanie Walker
Yes, There Are Others Out There…
That’ll charge you upwards of $6500 to offer you similar packages and lesson plans.
You’ll find people teaching this same course, just broken up into different pieces and charging different rates. And that quickly adds up!
Or! The dreaded waitlist game. Did you find someone you looked forward to working with, just to find out that their course isn’t open and to plug in your email to be waitlisted?
<<Enroll Now>>
Learning to Write That Novel of Your Dreams Shouldn’t Cost You An Insane Amount…
You can forget the courses that’ll cost you upwards of $6500, the broken separate courses that rack up over time, or the waitlists that might discourage you. Join me on this live eight-week journey that will educate you, motivate you, and leave you feeling so excited and falling in love with your ideas, your characters, and your chapters.
Where else are you going to find:
The Entire Notes to Novel Course [valued at $1497]
Worksheets, Cheat Sheets, and Checklists
FAQ Library
Private Podcast
Private Students-Only Facebook Group [valued at $497]
8 Weeks of Live Q & A with Savannah Gilbo [valued at $997]
I believe so strongly in the written word, what writers are capable of, and want to make this program affordable and reachable! That’s why I’m offering Notes to Novel for just $1497!
<<Enroll Now>>
In Addition, I’m Offering These Surefire Bonuses That No Writer Should Be Without!
Bonus #1: The Writer’s Guide to Finding & Developing Story Ideas [valued at $97]
If you have snippets of an idea, you have the potential for a full-length and great novel! In this bonus, you’ll find a step-by-step guide to finding and developing your ideas. You’ll also find my favorite spots to find new story ideas, as well!
Bonus #2: The Next Steps Story Editing Workshop [valued at $397]
This 1-hour training will help answer your question, “I’ve finished my draft…what comes next?” In this walkthrough, you’ll uncover what to take on first, second, and third when it comes time to edit. Does your draft look messy? That’s okay! You’ll learn how to clean up and polish it!
Bonus #3: LIMITED TIME BONUS – The Picking Your Publishing Path Workshop [valued at $397]
In this 60-minute workshop, I’ll walk you through an overview of the publishing universe. Together, we’ll go over the three main publishing paths, the pros and cons of each, what a literary agent is and what their role is in the publishing process, and why you must embrace entrepreneurship no matter which path you choose!
Altogether? This program is valued at over $3500!
But when you enroll today, you’ll receive all of this for just $1497!
<<Enroll Now>>
Don’t Put Off Your Writing Dreams for Another Year…
While I don’t want to waitlist anyone, my doors are only open until June 26, 2024 at 11:59 PM PT. I want to give every writer an opportunity to make their dreams come to life.
Many of us think to ourselves that if we don’t act now, we’ll do it later when we’re braver, when we’re ready.
We continue to put it off until we forget about it altogether.
Why wait?
I want to be able to help everyone achieve their dream of writing their novel! I do! Which is why the doors to my live course are only open for a limited time so that I can.
<<Enroll Now>>
"Savannah helped me cut through the noise and focus on what was most important in my story and I finished my first draft!"
"I had a TON of ideas for a story but no idea what to do with them. I write fantasy so I usually get consumed in world-building or creating cool magic systems, but all that doesn't make a story. And it can actually get quite overwhelming. Savannah helped me cut through the noise and focus on what was most important in my story and I finished my first 100,000-word draft! So excited!"
–Laura Michaels
All You Need To Know!
After you click “Enroll Now” you’ll be taken to our secure order page where you’ll fill our order form of your name, email, and billing address.
Next, you’ll select from two payment options:
6 Installments of $297
One-Time Payment of $1497
Click Step Two to proceed and enter your payment [Visa, Mastercard, American Express, Discover, or PayPal accepted].
You’ll receive a confirmation of payment, where you’ll then be able to access our private members area and find all of your content, videos, worksheets, bonuses, etc.
You’ll then get an invitation to join the Students-Only Facebook Group where you can introduce yourself, meet, and brainstorm with other writers!
30-Day Money Back Guarantee
I am passionate about the content you’ll uncover in Notes to Novel. I want you to see for yourself just how profound of a difference it can make to you and your writing, risk-free!
Which is why if you decide that Notes to Novel isn’t for you, you can request for a refund within the first 30 days. You’ll receive ALL of your money back!
Everything You Get When You Invest in You and Your Writing Today!
The Entire Notes to Novel Course! [valued at $1497]
*Also Mobile Friendly
Module 1: Mindset – Writing Your First Draft
Module 2: Genre – The Key to Writing a Novel
Module 3: Crafting Your Characters & Settings
Module 4: Scenes – The Building Blocks of Story
Module 5: The Art of Outlining Your Novel
Module 6: Writing Forward to Finish Your Draft
Plus Implementation Weeks for Writing!
Private Students-Only Facebook Group
Live Q & A with Savannah Gilbo
Worksheets, Cheat Sheets, & Checklists
FAQ Library
Bonus #1: The Writer’s Guide to Finding & Developing Story Ideas [valued at $97]
Bonus #2: The Next Steps Story Editing Workshop [valued at $397]
Bonus #3: LIMITED TIME BONUS – The Picking Your Publishing Path Workshop [valued at $397]
Don’t Say No To Yourself Any Longer
Any investment towards ourselves is nerve wracking, but keep something in mind!
You’re not alone. I will be there with you every week by your side through every chapter, every piece of your outline.
You can always reach out in the Private Students-Only Facebook Group to brainstorm, ask advice, in an environment where you feel safe and comfortable to do so with feedback that’s more than, “It’s good!” And I’ll be there, too!
Your course material is paced every week so you not only have a weekly email to look forward to from me, but you also have time to absorb and process, have time to execute the course work, and rock your implementation weeks!
Live Q & A Sessions to ask me any questions you have directly. I want all of my students to have access to me in a friendly, fun, and comfortable coaching environment!
You have lifetime access to the program, with any upgrades at no additional cost to you.
All of the bonus material for you to sink your fingers into.
Select from one of two options:
6 Installments of $297
One-Time Purchase of $1497
<<Purchase Now>>
“Over the years, I've tried to write by myself and never made any kind of progress. I was frustrated and about to give up on my novel when I found this course—and I'm so glad I did. I learned more from working with Savannah than I have from years of my own research—and I finally finished an entire draft of my novel!”
—Amanda Norri
Questions? I’ve Got Answers!
FAQ:
[[Insert FAQ here]]
You Have What It Takes To Write Your Book…All You Have to Do is Believe You Can…And I Can’t Wait to Be There Every Chapter!
Notes to Novel is for…
The writer who seeks a reusable outline to compose high-quality drafts.
The exhausted writer who is sick, tired, and frustrated of sapping their energy on resources that come up vague.
The overwhelmed writer who started their novel writing journey and has found stagnant progress.
The disgruntled, yet open writer who finished their first draft and is dissatisfied with how it turned out. Who wants to improve on it prior to submission to self-publishing, or agents, and is open to feedback.
The overwritten writer who wants to have fun again with their work, and wants to feel things are flowing, as well as their words.
<<I’m Ready!>>
