MTN MoMo: Retaining Users in a Crowded Mobile Money Market
The Mobile Money Problem:
Too many merchants sign up for MTN MoMo but keep using physical cash because "cash is faster."
Here is the high-retention video script structure I wrote to solve this and drive active user engagement:
[0:00 - 0:05] Hook:
Visual: A busy trader in a market struggling to count dirty notes while a long queue waits.
Audio: "How many hours do you lose every week just looking for change for your customers?"
[0:05 - 0:15] The Pain Point:
Visual: Close-up of fake notes or torn cash being rejected.
Audio: "Torn notes, missing change, and cash handling risks slow down your business growth every single day."
[0:15 - 0:30] The Solution (The Shift):
Visual: The trader smoothly taps their phone; the transaction completes in 2 seconds. The queue moves instantly.
Audio: "With MTN MoMo Merchant, your phone is your secure cash register. Zero missing change. Zero stress. Instant confirmation."
[0:30 - 0:45] Call to Action:
Visual: Text on screen showing the shortcode to dial.
Audio: "Stop counting paper. Start scaling your business. Dial *126# to activate your merchant account today.