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"You, with your stubbornness, just couldn't give up!" Liam's voice gets dangerously shaky, and Noah puts his hand on his, comforting him silently. "Thank you, Noah, for brining dance back in my life," miraculously, Liam finishes without letting any water escape, but Noah still crooks a smile and pulls the other into him.
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"But you, in all your stubbornness, just wouldn't give up!" Liam's voice gets dangerously shaky, and Noah puts his hand on his, comforting him silently. "Thank you, Noah, for bringing dance back in my life." Miraculously, Liam finishes without letting any tears escape, but Noah still crooks a smile and pulls the other into him.
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Posted Nov 13, 2023
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