Subject: Your Glow, But Greener – Here’s 10% Off 💚
Hey [First Name],
Welcome to EcoGlow- where beauty meets sustainability. 🌱✨
We believe skincare should feel amazing, work effortlessly, and be kind to the planet. That’s why everything we create is vegan, cruelty-free, and made with skin-loving ingredients (because your glow shouldn’t come at the earth’s expense).
As a little welcome gift, here’s 10% off your first order.
Use code: WELCOME10 at checkout.
[Shop Now]
just a example
Glow consciously,
The EcoGlow Team
Objective:
The main goal of this email is to welcome new subscribers and drive their first purchase by introducing them to EcoGlow’s brand identity, values, and products. We want to:
Build trust by highlighting the brand’s commitment to sustainability and clean beauty.
Create an emotional connection by aligning with the customer’s values (vegan, cruelty-free, eco-friendly).
Encourage immediate action with a clear incentive (10% off) and a straightforward call-to-action (CTA).
Why This Format Works:
Short and Scannable:
People don’t read emails- they scan them. This email is concise, with clear sections: a warm welcome, the brand’s mission, the offer, and the CTA. It’s easy to digest in seconds.
Strong CTA with Incentive:
The 10% off discount is a no-brainer. It’s simple, valuable, and creates urgency without being pushy. The CTA button (“Shop Now”) is clear and stands out, making it easy for customers to take the next step.
Visual Hierarchy:
The email uses bold text, line breaks, and emojis to guide the reader’s eye. The most important elements (the discount code and CTA) are impossible to miss.
Brand Consistency:
From the subject line to the closing (“Glow consciously”), every word reinforces EcoGlow’s identity. This consistency builds trust and makes the brand memorable.
Why This Approach Converts:
This email isn’t just about selling- it’s about starting a relationship. By leading with values (sustainability, clean beauty) and offering a tangible benefit (10% off), it speaks directly to the customer’s desires and pain points. It’s not just another promotional email; it’s an invitation to join a movement.
And let’s be real- people love feeling good about their purchases. When you combine a great product with a great purpose, you’re not just selling skincare; you’re selling a lifestyle. That’s why this email works.