Long Form FB Ad With 5.5X ROAS

Angelo Wong

Content Writer
Copywriter
Ghostwriter
Microsoft Word
Created a long form FB direct response copywriting ad for a client in the barber education niche. Below is the entire ad which resulted in a 5.5X ROAS for selling an online course teaching people how to prepare for the barber exam.

In 2004, I almost couldn’t pass Barber School because I couldn’t pay for tuition. By 2011, I got the award for Sacramento’s Best Barber Shop.
Today, I have more clients than I can count...
...and they keep telling me to increase my prices because they want to pay me more.
But before I became successful as a barber, the *BIGGEST* challenge I had to overcome was the Barber’s Exam.
With a ton of topics to study, like…                                                   
Chemical Texture Services, Anatomy & Physiology, Bacteriology, Hair Disorders, Skin Histology, and much more…
I was overwhelmed.
And I *desperately* wanted to pass, because I had already spent so much money on Barber School.
What made me even more worried was I knew a LOT of smart people that failed the exam…
…Even when they studied a lot.
Worse yet, most people that fail the exam fail by less than 10%!
I didn’t want to go through the experience of failing, because I had to make money as soon as possible to pay my bills. And I knew if I failed the test, I would need to wait another 3 months to try again, which would dig me deeper in my financial hole.
And it didn’t make any sense to me that people were failing the exam, even when they were working so hard to study for it.
So I became obsessed studying…on HOW to study.
And I noticed that there were a lot of problems when using practice exams…
…They didn’t tell you what you got wrong, so you’re never sure what to spend your time on studying.
…And if they did tell you what you got wrong, the tests were too short.
…And there’s nothing out there that tells you *HOW* to study. They just expect you to memorize these tests and go in and pass.
After many failures, I perfected the system on how to study. In fact, I became so good at passing tests I was holding:
✔️A realtor’s license
✔️An insurance license
✔️A notary’s license
✔️A barber’s license
All at the SAME TIME.
And I became so good at taking tests, I created something just to help people pass the Barber’s State Board Exam.
I created something that has the full package:
Practice tests that tell you what you get wrong, so you won’t waste valuable studying time looking at questions you already know how to answer.
Tests that are timed, and tests that are long so you’re ready for anything that the real exam throws at you.
And lastly…
And most importantly…
I teach you a ton of tips and tricks to help you pass the exam. I can’t go through EVERYTHING here, but I’ll drop one of the secrets right now – this ALONE could help you pass the exam: 🤫
For test questions that have “All of the above / none of the above” as an option, 52% of the time that will be the right answer. So if you have 4 choices and you have no clue how to answer the question…
…Just guessing
“All of the above / none of the above” will double your chances of getting that question right (25% to 52%).
And since most people that fail the exam fail by *LESS THAN 10%,* a simple trick like this could be the difference between walking out of the room passing, or having to wait another 3 months to start making an income.
And that is just one of many tricks that I’ll show you to help you pass the exam.
Not only will you have lifetime access to 2000+ practice questions…
Not only will you have timed exams so you can practice taking tests under real time pressure…
Not only will you get instant feedback on what you get wrong so you won’t waste precious time studying for things you already know…
You will also get a ton of proven tips and tricks to further optimize your results on Exam Day, so you can just “one and done” the exam.
So to be honest…It costs me a lot of money to run these ads. In fact, it takes about $70.28 of ads to get one purchase.
I normally charge $197 for this, but for the first 15 people that act…
And ONLY for the first 15 people that act…
I’m willing to lose a few bucks by just making this only cost $137 (or 30% OFF)…
What’s the catch?
Here’s the catch – if you purchase this and you *pass* your exam, please let me know and tell your friends so more people can pass the exam!
And if you use my system and fail your exam for some reason, just show me proof that you failed the exam and I’ll give you your money back.
So there’s NO risk.
Be one of the first 15 people to get this and get your 30% OFF by clicking the “Learn More” button below!

2018

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