Academic biography - a case study

Geneva Oke

I provided a content and line edit of a biography intended for an academic publication. The original biography was over the 200-word limit and contained lengthy, complicated sentences. I suggested edits to eliminate redundancies and clarify the author's narrative. Throughout the process focused on clarity, I naturally reduced the length of the text.
Please note that I changed some information for the author's privacy.
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Posted Jul 31, 2023

A content and line edit of an academic's biography.

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