SV Creative needed some help with the copy on a project proposal for a potential client in the 3D modeling space. The original version was wordy and hard to follow, regardless of whether the client had niche industry knowledge or not.
After a two rounds of heavy copy editing, we created a proposal that was clear, concise, and compelling, which won them the project.
Before
The original proposal was wordy and difficult to follow, especially if the hiring manager did not have specific knowledge around 3D asset creation.
After
Post-copy edit. General messaging is cleaner and easier to follow, allowing the client to know exactly what to expect.