Website Copywriting for E-commerce Store

Here is what I did for copywriting for an E-commerce store:

The description under each subheading were done by me and this is what it used to say before:

Our eyewear is super duper cheap, and you won't believe how we do it! Forget about going to an optician like a normal person. Who needs appointments and driving when you can just sit on your lazy bum with your digital device and internet connection? Yeah, that's right! We bring the shopping experience to you, because we know you can't be bothered to leave your house.

We totally swear that our eyewear is top-notch quality, and we'll tell you why. We make every single pair ourselves. We're like the masters of frame design and manufacturing, and we use these fancy-schmancy optical machines and software that are supposed to be the best in the industry. Our lab is so high-tech, it can churn out lenses for any prescription, and we even slap on some coatings to make them look all shiny. Oh, and we do this tinting thing for sunglasses and blue light glasses, because, hey, why not?

So, once we're done playing with all the machines and stuff, we lovingly stuff your glasses into a hard-shell case. And guess what? We're so nice that we throw in a lens cloth as a freebie. Yeah, we're all about those little extras. Then, we give your precious package to some courier dudes, the best in the biz, apparently, who take your glasses on a world tour to over 80 countries. Don't worry, we crossed our fingers that they won't smash your glasses into a million pieces before they reach your doorstep.