Two fictional business decks, each built toward a specific decision: a staged $60,000 fragrance launch and a six-week, $9,000 research-workspace pilot. Each has 12 slides. These are self-initiated, AI-assisted studies. The BEFORE slides are constructed drafts, not client files.
The brief
Keep the message and illustrative data fixed while turning familiar office drafts into a coherent sequence: proposal, supporting evidence, practical constraints and a closing decision.
Aurelia: make the release rule visible
The funding table separates the $35,000 initial authorization from the $25,000 held until readiness review. The closing slide repeats that approval action. Positioning, sample-credit terms, acquisition assumptions, unit economics and named owners support the decision. The 12-week plan assumes a developed formula and qualified supplier.
Vantrel: define what the pilot will test
The six-week, $9,000 proposal states scope, ownership, read-only inputs, workflow success criteria and an exit rule. The illustrative allocation and simulated returns demonstrate chart design. They are separate from pilot success measures and are not achieved investment results.
Files and review limits
The combined PPTX has 26 slides, native text, six editable tables and two charts with embedded data workbooks. The comparison PDF contains 24 labelled pairs. A separate reading copy supplies slide text and explicit chart values.
The PPTX was structurally checked and rendered, but has not been inspected inside Microsoft PowerPoint. The reading copy does not certify accessibility: image descriptions, reading order and actual target-application behavior still need verification.
My contribution
Creative direction, requirements, copy and data consistency, review and iterative refinement of AI-assisted work. All brands, budgets, capabilities and data are illustrative. No paid-client outcome is claimed.
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Aurelia cover: constructed BEFORE above, refined AFTER below. The fictional proposal and message stay fixed.
Aurelia funding: the same $60,000 authorization, with $35,000 initial funding and $25,000 held for readiness review. BEFORE above, AFTER below.
Vantrel exposure: the same illustrative allocations of 36%, 24%, 22% and 18%, totaling 100%. BEFORE above, AFTER below.
JD_Park_Presentation_Reading_Copy.txt
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Two complete fictional business decks with editable PowerPoint elements and matching redesign comparisons. Self-initiated, AI-assisted work.
