The Watcher in the Keyhole by Samia NazThe Watcher in the Keyhole by Samia Naz

The Watcher in the Keyhole

Samia Naz

Samia Naz

The Watcher in the Keyhole

Lena had always felt safe in her grandmother’s house. It smelled of lavender and old books, filled with memories of childhood summers. But now, standing alone in the dim hallway, she felt something was wrong. The house was too quiet.
Her grandmother had passed away a week ago, and Lena had returned to sort through her things. She was supposed to be alone. But as she moved from room to room, a strange sensation prickled at the back of her neck—like someone was watching.
By the time night fell, Lena was exhausted. She climbed into the old four-poster bed in her grandmother’s room and pulled the covers tight. The house groaned as it settled, the old pipes whispering in the silence. She was just drifting off when she heard it.
A soft, deliberate knock.
Lena’s breath caught. It had come from the locked door at the end of the hallway—the one that had always remained shut, the one her grandmother had warned her never to open.
Never open that door, Lena. No matter what you hear.
Her pulse pounded. Maybe she was imagining it. Maybe grief was playing tricks on her. But then the knock came again, followed by something worse—slow, scratching sounds, like nails raking against wood.
Swallowing her fear, Lena slid out of bed and crept toward the door. She pressed her ear against it. Silence. Then, in the stillness, she heard something else.
Breathing.
She jerked back, heart hammering. The house was locked. No one else was here.
But there was a keyhole.
The brass key had long since vanished, but the tiny hole still remained. The logical part of her mind screamed don’t do it, but something deeper—something primal—urged her forward. Slowly, she bent down, closing one eye to peer through.
At first, all she saw was darkness. Then, something shifted. A figure stood in the blackness beyond, impossibly still. A tall, shadowy silhouette. And the worst part?
It was watching her.
A single bloodshot eye stared back through the keyhole. Unblinking. Unmoving.
Lena stumbled backward, gasping, slamming her hand over her mouth to keep from screaming. She scrambled to her feet and fled back to her room, locking the door behind her.
She didn’t sleep that night. Morning came slowly, the pale sunlight leaking through the curtains. When she finally gathered the courage to check the door again, her hands trembled as she pressed her eye to the keyhole once more.
Nothing.
Just a solid sheet of red.
A cold realization crawled up her spine.
Whoever—whatever—had been watching her… had no eye.
It had been looking through the keyhole with its own. And now, all she saw was the crimson of its waiting gaze.
The knock came again.
This time, the door handle turned.
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Posted Feb 10, 2025

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