A brilliant idea buried under too many words. DAIVIN had working prototype that
generates breathable oxygen from water, eliminating scuba tanks entirely. But their
deck? Technical chaos that lost the plot in slide 3.
What I Did
I didn't just redesign slides. I rebuilt the story:
→ Cut 60% of the content (less is more for investors)
→ Rewrote everything with YC-style clarity-bold claims, real numbers, zero fluff
→ Added the missing pieces: competitive moat, unit economics, the actual ask
→ Made complex electrolysis tech feel inevitable, not sci-fi
→ Positioned them as category creators, not "better scuba gear"
The result? A deck that makes you want to write a check by slide 5.
Why This Worked
Great pitch decks aren't about having all the information. They're about having
the RIGHT information in the RIGHT order.
I studied 50+ successful YC decks, dove deep into their tech and market, then
distilled everything into one clear narrative: "We're making the impossible
possible and we've already proven it works."
Every slide answers: Why now? Why you? Why will this win?
The Impact
From "here's our technology" → to "here's why investors should care"
The deck is now ready for their pre-seed raise and YC application. More
importantly, it actually tells the story of what they're building, not just
what it does.
What You'll See
14 slides that move from problem to solution to traction to "let's do this."
Clean design. Sharp copy. One clear story.
If you're building something complex and need to make investors get it,
This is how it's done.
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Posted Feb 3, 2026
Transformed a cluttered 16-slide deck into a sharp, investor-ready YC pitch for a startup building the world's first tankless underwater breathing device.