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Original Context (Before Editing)

Uh, so like, the company's sales went up a lot last quarter, but there's still, you know, some stuff that's not great? Like, they need to talk better between the different parts of the company, and the marketing peeps, like, gotta do a better job talking to the people they wanna sell stuff to.

Edited and Proofread Text

Despite the substantial increase in the company's sales over the last quarter, several challenges still require attention. There is a need for improved communication between departments, and the marketing team must enhance its audience-targeting efforts