Pre-Launch Email Review: 10 Fixes and a Rebuild (Sample) by Shawn BarnesPre-Launch Email Review: 10 Fixes and a Rebuild (Sample) by Shawn Barnes

Pre-Launch Email Review: 10 Fixes and a Rebuild (Sample)

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Shawn Barnes
A 4-page pre-launch review of a meal-kit launch email, delivered the way a client gets it. The original email is marked with 10 numbered problems, each with a specific fix and a one-line reason (subject line, preheader, opening hook, buried offer, button, contrast, alt text, mobile and footer compliance).
It includes the rebuilt email, three subject line options, an images-off and phone check, an A/B pick between two landing heroes with the reasoning and test size, and a 6-item send checklist. The brand, offer and pages are fictional.

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Before and after review of a launch email with 10 numbered fixes and reasons, a rebuilt version, an A/B landing hero pick and a pre-send checklist.

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