Subject line: Need a new suit for the meeting?

Do you need a new suit for your upcoming meeting, event, wedding, or party? We’ve got you.

Hi (name). This is Brandon. I’m the owner of a USA-based bespoke tailoring company – Esatto.

Don’t worry, I’m not stealing any of your data. I just wanted to reach out to you because we may be a great FIT for you.

As You're the CFO of the company, you know the importance of a suit on your personality.

You can understand that a great suit can always boost your looks and confidence, whether it’s an important meeting, interview, or big event.

But getting a perfect suit is always difficult. You can look into hundreds of malls, but you won’t find a suit with good fit, fabric, quality, and comfort.

Some will have a good fabric but not a good fit. Some will have a good fit but not good quality. And this cycle goes on and on…

At Esatto, we create custom-made clothing, especially suits, of good fabric and quality tailored to your exact measurements and preferences. 

For over 6 years, we've been delivering suits that boost the customers’ looks and confidence. 

We make sure that everything from the top to bottom perfectly fits and is comfortable for you. 

We believe that you deserve nothing less than the best. That’s why Vitale Barberis Canonico (VBC), made in Italy, is our fabric choice. 

But you can always choose your favorite fabric.

Don’t worry. It’s simpler than ever with our remote bespoke process:

First, we send you a link that lets you use your phone’s camera to take 20+ measurements for your custom suits and shirts, all in under 5 minutes.

Next, we create two unfinished fitting suits in different sizes to fine-tune your measurements.

We will make and send you a finished suit to test to ensure everything is perfect. We’ll remake or alter this suit until you feel we’ve achieved a perfect fit.

Then, we take your selected fabrics and customizations and have our factory make your order. 

If any detail does not meet your expectations, we make it right.

Or simply reply to this email, and we’ll contact you.

See you in your new suit.

Brandon

Subject line: Here’s why your Instagram reels have only 2k-3k views.

Hi [first name],

My name is Shivam.

I came across your Instagram profile and was impressed by the value you’re giving in your videos (also followed you 😉).

But I noticed your Instagram reels getting only 2k-3k views.

It may be because your videos have a lot of value, but are not hooky enough.

It means that your videos are not able to hold people’s attention throughout.

People are having a marathon in their Instagram Reels tab. You have to grab their attention in the first three seconds to get them to stop the scroll.

And the best way to hold people’s attention in a video is to entertain people with your editing skills.

Different sound effects, graphics, images, overlays, etc, this type of editing stuff can attract people’s attention and make them stay till the last moment.

You will see a massive improvement in your engagement and views just by polishing your editing.

So if you want to spice up your editing game, hit reply and let me know.

Sincerely,

Shivam

Subject line: How to “hack” the algorithm

Hey [first name],

I saw your videos on Instagram about sales and loved them.

But I noticed something strange in your videos.

Your videos are not getting as many views as I thought.

This may be because of one mistake that most people make in creating content.

The common slip-up for many people is looking at the algorithm, not the audience.

You have to hack the audience to hack the algorithm.

Because the audience is the algorithm.

The algorithm shows, what people love. The algorithm doesn’t show what people don’t love.

So you have to make something valuable that people love in order to “hack” the algorithm.

But if your videos are still not getting enough engagement and views even though you put so much value into them,

Then your videos might need some professional video editing touch.

And by “professional video editing touch”, I mean some real editing that requires hours to do.

Not just putting some pictures and subtitles using some mobile software.

So if you want some “professional video editing touch” for your videos that actually helps your business to grow through short-form content,

You can reply to the person behind this email.

My name is Shivam. A real person behind the other end of this email.

I’m a professional short-form video editor who helps coaches like you promote their services through short videos.

If you need my service, you can reply to me with some details.

Sencilrily, 

- Shivam