Raising in the next few months?
Send me your pitch deck and I'll review it for free.
✓ A prioritized list of what to fix
✓ One of your slides, redesigned
✓ Before it reaches investors
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1. One idea per slide
2. Titles that state the point
3. Numbers investors can check
Simple rules, but most decks break all three. Which one does yours break?
"TAM: $147 Billion (source: various reports)."
Investors see this on almost every deck, and they discount it instantly.
What works better is bottom-up math. Number of customers × what each pays = your real market. Every input is something you can defend in the meeting.
Smaller number. Much more convincing.
Same company. Same facts. One slide.
Before: six full-sentence bullets, all the same weight.
After: one headline, one big number, three short causes.
The rest doesn't disappear. You say it out loud while investors look at the slide.
Full before/after redesign in my portfolio →...
Most pitch deck titles are labels: "Traction." "The Problem." "Market."
Investors skim. If they only read your slide titles, they should still get the whole story.
So make every title a point.
"Traction" → "Revenue tripled in six months"
Try it on your deck tonight. Which slide title would you rewrite first? 👇
