Really depends on a few things here. First, how critical is "pulses remaining"? It only shows on the colored version, so before comparing looks I'd decide whether that label belongs on the screen at all.
Second, context of use: how long does someone sit in front of this...
I created 2 concepts for the same tagline "Shaping Skylines", for a vertical construction company. Both of these are scroll triggered, which one you prefer? I'm biased towards the skewed option.
I'm giving a free component copy for both of them:
Zoom in: https://framer.link/CQNgUkU
Skewed: https://framer.link/XTmQcBK
Check them out and if you'd like, use them in your upcoming project!