Update: a proper walkthrough of Brasswater Gauge 🎬
49 seconds, one chapter per part of the machine: the valve plays, water is the timeline, the tank shows the buffer, the reel cabinet jumps between scenes, and the red lamp puts it all to sleep.
Green for me, and I'd bet on it converting better too. The red version is loud in the way every food app is loud, while the green makes the burger the hero and the screen instantly recognizable in a feed. The green background also gives the white FLAVOR POP type far more contrast, so the message lands a beat faster.
Your material-page revision gives the phone layout its own reading sequence. The change to thumbnail rows with full-row links seems particularly useful for showing that a material entry opens another page. How did you distinguish those clickable rows from the non-interactive project facts?