Developmental feedback on your completed screenplay by Chip StreetDevelopmental feedback on your completed screenplay by Chip Street

Developmental feedback on your completed screenplayChip Street

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You'll get a second set of eyes on your early draft from a professional sold and optioned indie screenwriter.

I'll share observations and insights about your plot, characters, dialogue, themes, and storyworld, and provide ideas and recommendations for improvement.

My goal is to help you craft a compelling story that keeps your reader or viewer engaged.

What's included

Embedded notes in your screenplay PDF.

I'll read your screenplay and embed notes addressing granular observations on your plot structure, character development, dialogue, and theme.

Supporting documentation.

I'll provide a 3-5 page document detailing in-depth recommendations for enhancing your descriptive text, plot structure, character voice and motivations, dialogue, and themes. I'll also share my thoughts on your personal stylistic voice.

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