Developmental feedback on your completed screenplay

Starting at

$

625

About this service

Summary

You'll get a second set of eyes on your early draft from a professional sold and optioned indie screenwriter.
I'll share observations and insights about your plot, characters, dialogue, themes, and storyworld, and provide ideas and recommendations for improvement.
My goal is to help you craft a compelling story that keeps your reader or viewer engaged.

FAQs

  • How do I get my script to you?

    Deliver your feature-length script as a PDF. Let me know if this is a rough draft, submission-ready, or production script. You can also share any other written feedback you've received from other sources as PDFs.

  • Do you have testimonials?

    Feel free to message me for testimonials, or visit https://williamstreetcreative.com/testimonials/

  • Why are you qualified?

    I'm a professional sold and optioned indie screenwriter. I've consulted for writers, producers, directors, and film instructors whose projects have gone on to be well-placed in contests, produced, and distributed. I've also been a submission judge for 3 film festivals.

What's included

  • Embedded notes in your screenplay PDF.

    I'll read your screenplay and embed notes addressing granular observations on your plot structure, character development, dialogue, and theme.

  • Supporting documentation.

    I'll provide a 3-5 page document detailing in-depth recommendations for enhancing your descriptive text, plot structure, character voice and motivations, dialogue, and themes. I'll also share my thoughts on your personal stylistic voice.


Duration

1 week

Skills and tools

Creative Writer
Screenwriter
Editor
Microsoft Word

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