One of the services I love offering is resume and LinkedIn optimization. A lot of people undersell themselves on paper — they list tasks instead of impact, or their resumes just don’t “pop” in a recruiter’s stack.
Here’s an example of how I take a plain resume entry and turn it into something professional, polished, and results-driven.
❌ Before (Client’s Original Resume Line)
Worked with medical equipment.
Helped with repairs and testing.
Did maintenance tasks.
✅ After (My Rewrite)
Repaired and maintained medical equipment including dialysis machines, infusion pumps, and ECG systems, improving reliability and patient safety.
Performed preventative maintenance across regional health centres, ensuring compliance with healthcare standards and reducing downtime.
Supported equipment testing and calibration for Non-Invasive Blood Pressure (NIBP) devices and dialysis systems, contributing to accurate diagnostics.
Made the impact specific and measurable (improving reliability, reducing downtime, contributing to accurate diagnostics).
Formatted for clarity and recruiter-friendly readability.
Final Thoughts
A strong resume isn’t just a list of what you did — it’s proof of what you can bring to the table. When I revamp resumes, I make sure every line sells your skills, highlights your impact, and positions you as the best fit for your next role.
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Posted Sep 9, 2025
Transformed a plain resume into a professional, polished, and results-driven document.