short story editing example

unedited version (shows my suggestions and raw content.) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rejKuHA1q97mM-fgwuTjzThQqJ2FzDJosXhE-IcNm7Q/edit?usp=sharing

edited version (what it looks like after I have edited the content.) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LLcMJvz0wE8u3NKZOfyUOk1Vqpr1WTKLVIeTzU9BYyY/edit?usp=sharing

short story was written and edited by me.