30-Minute Pilot Script Edit (Adobe Acrobat)

Brooke

Brooke H

Script feedback provided: 91 comments, edits and notes on a 40 page script, via Adobe Acrobat. Feedback from this particular client:

For the past three years, Brooke has regularly proofread documents / manuscripts for me. She’s always done a great job at catching mistakes (typos, format, etc) but, she’s also provided valuable insights/ suggestions on content as well. Brooke is dependable, easy to work with and flexible. 5 stars rating all around.

See sample below of types of comments/feedback provided. Please note that this client's IP (script lines) have been redacted. This script went on to win multiple screenwriting contests.
Feedback provided included grammar corrections, story/character inconsistencies and script style/format adjustments.
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Posted Mar 14, 2023

Provided in-line commented feedback on writing/grammar, clarity of story, consistency of narrative and characters, and consistency with screenplay style guides.