Developmental Editing of 'Against the Clock'
Joyce Bloemker
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Posted Jul 3, 2025
Developmental editing for equestrian romance novel 'Against the Clock'.
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Developmental Editor of Against the Clock by Jenny Roman
With two rounds of developmental editing, I helped Jenny Roman smooth out the plot points and subplots in this equestrian romance. Working together, we changed the story arc to strengthen the story as a whole.
I was really struggling with the manuscript before Joyce looked at it. I knew it wasn’t right, but I couldn’t work out what was wrong. Joyce gave me a sensible framework to use to when considering the plot retrospectively – as a result, I was able to see the story arc more clearly and use her suggestions to revise the draft and improve the story.