Developmental Editing of 'Against the Clock' by Joyce BloemkerDevelopmental Editing of 'Against the Clock' by Joyce Bloemker

Developmental Editing of 'Against the Clock'

Joyce Bloemker

Joyce Bloemker

Developmental Editor of Against the Clock by Jenny Roman

With two rounds of developmental editing, I helped Jenny Roman smooth out the plot points and subplots in this equestrian romance. Working together, we changed the story arc to strengthen the story as a whole.

I was really struggling with the manuscript before Joyce looked at it. I knew it wasn’t right, but I couldn’t work out what was wrong. Joyce gave me a sensible framework to use to when considering the plot retrospectively – as a result, I was able to see the story arc more clearly and use her suggestions to revise the draft and improve the story.

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Posted Jul 3, 2025

Developmental editing for equestrian romance novel 'Against the Clock'.