Comicbook Script [Vibrant]

Main Cast and Character designs:

Chris – 4

Sarah – 2

Maria – 1

Nchuk – 3

Kingpin – 1

J. Price – 1

Mark – 2

Rae – 2

Strong Villian – 1

Secondary Cast:

Reporter

Crow Agent 1&2

Crow Pilot

Crow soldiers

Doctor

S. Villian henchmen

CAST:

Chris –

Superhero Name: Unstoppable (Issue finale – Vibrant)

Secret alias: Chris Okafor

Family;

Mother: Maria [Super Charge]

Father: Nchuk Okafor [Invulnerable]

Sister: Sarah [Spoil]

Grandmother: Estelle Brown

Grandfather: Raymond Brown

Abilities: energy manipulation, energy absorption, energy detection. {Unknown to him, initially had low output but it began to grow after gaining his mother’s supercharge}

Future potential;

● Energy Blasts

● Atomic Level Energy Explosions

● Energy Constructs

● Energy Manipulated Flight

● Supercharge All Abilities

● Significantly Increase Strength, Speed, Durability, Stamina, etc.

● When Supercharge is Maxed, Vibrant himself becomes Invulnerable, However, when maxed, the power eats away and deteriorates the body

Sarah –

Superhero Name: Spoil (Not revealed in issue 1)

Secret alias: Sarah Okafor

Family;

Mother: Maria Okafor [Super Charge]

Father: Nchuk Okafor [Invulnerable]

Brother: Chris [Vibrant]

Grandmother: Estelle Brown

Grandfather: Raymond Brown

Abilities: Magnetism, Low-level metal manipulation.

Maria –

Superhero Name: Supercharge

Secret alias: Maria Okafor

Family;

Husband: Nchuk Okafor [Invulnerable]

Son: Chris [Vibrant]

Daughter: Sarah [Spoil]

Mother: Estelle Brown

Father: Raymond Brown

Abilities: Super charge; supercharges normal human abilities to superhuman levels (on self only), supercharges superpowers on self and others. {Hidden ability: Can be passed down to direct bloodline on death}

Nchuk –

Superhero Name: Invulnerable

Secret alias: Nchuk Okafor

Family;

Wife: Maria Brown

Daughter: Sarah [Spoil]

Son: Chris [Vibrant]

Mother: N/A

Father: N/A

Abilities: Super dense skin, muscle, and bones. Super strength, flight

Kingpin –

Alias: Kingpin | Merchant of Death | second leader of New World Order terrorist organization

Family; N/A

Abilities: Metal manipulation

J. Price –

Secret alias: Jeffery Price

Family; N/A

Abilities: N/A

Mark –

Superhero Name: Hunter

Secret alias: Mark Polaris

Family;

Mother: Stella Polaris

Father: Albert Polaris

Sister: Rae Polaris [Forger]

Grandmother: N/A

Grandfather: N/A

Abilities: Self-hardening (can harden any part, or all of his body)

Future potential: Full Carbon State (Harder than diamonds)

Rae –

Superhero Name: Forger

Secret alias: Rae Polaris

Family;

Mother: Stella Polaris

Father: Albert Polaris

Brother: Mark Polaris [Hunter]

Grandmother: N/A

Grandfather: N/A

Abilities: Ability to manipulate electronics

Future potential: Perceive and manipulate electromagnetic field.

Strong Villian –

Alias: Impact

Government name – Richard ‘Dick’ Johnson

Family;

Mother: Evelyn Johnson [DECEASED]

Father: Alfred Johnson [DECEASED]

Brother: Paul Johnson, Jeremy Johnson [DECEASED]

Grandmother: N/A

Grandfather: N/A

Abilities: Absorbs kinetic energy from impact on his body. {formerly had low absorption threshold until certain secret experiments increased his limits}

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COMIC SCRIPT

Page 1

Panels – 4

Panel 1 – peaceful city view or city skyline

Narration: what would you do if you could fly? Or stop time? Before, these were just questions. Ones that no one could really answer. But that all changed decades ago when the first generation of super-able babies were born. Almost all at once, people just saw their children burping fireballs, playing tag in the air, disappearing from their seats in class only to appear the next moment in a different seat. It was only then that Mankind realized the world had changed forever, and all they could do was try to adapt to it. New laws were made, Religions revised, and Society did its best to find peace. But not all humans want peace.

Panel 2 – an explosion in a side of the city

Panel 3 – birds eye view of the scene of the explosion from the journalist’s chopper.

Panel 4 – reporter reporting that the conflict has almost ended and he wants to get closer to get an interview from the hero of the day

Reporter’s text: It seems to have been wrapped up. We’ll try to get to the ground and get some exclusive information from the no. 1 himself about the attack we just witnessed

Page 2

Panels – 6

Panel 1 – transition. reporter’s broadcast on a TV

[is there any text?]

Panel 2 – Chris and Sarah watching their dad on the tv.

Panel 3 – Chris and Sarah on the sofa

Chris’s text: dad’s so cool. I’m gonna be a superhero like dad when I grow up.

Sarah’s text: to be a superhero you have to be super fist dummy. Haha...

Panel 4 – Chris striking his best superhero pose

Chris: I’m super! *mumbles* mum says I’m just taking my time… *raises voice again* when I get bigger ill awaken my superpower and I’ll be... *dramatic pose* UNTOUCHABLE!

Sarah: hahahahaha… you’re barely able to touch the light switch. Who’d wanna touch you, gremlin? haha

Panel 5 - Chris making a face

Chris: yeah? Well, you should be called Spoiler! Cos you’re a pain in the butt. Hmph!

Panel 6 – Sarah running out of the living room into the hallway

Sarah text: moooomm! Chris said a bad word!

Chris text: no way! She’s lying! She called me a dummy!

Sarah: liar!

Chris: moom! She called me liar!

Page 11

Panel 1 – Chris jumps up from sleep on his bed saying “mum!”

Panel 2 – Chris sits on the edge of his bed with his eyes closed and his head in his palms.

Chris Narration.: I can never remember that day clearly... I get the occasional dreams, or maybe nightmares, but even that is no help. The next thing I remember after that day is waking up on the hospital with my grandparents already there. the official story is that the explosion was caused by an unknown gas leak under the house. They said mine was the only body found in the rubble. I’ve never been able to process all that?! Why was dad trying to hurt mom? What happened to Sarah? Why couldn’t they find their bodies?

Panel 3 – Chris is in the bathroom rinsing his face

Even since my grandparents took me in, I could tell there was much they were keeping from me. Though I can tell they are just trying to protect me, it still feels a bit… they legally adopted me so they changed my last name to theirs, my mom’s maiden name. it helped me readjust back to normal society. At least no one asks me if my dad was the #1 hero who they say had a mental breakdown and disappeared.

Panel 4 – Chris sees his alarm go off on his phone

Chris: Shit! I’m gonna be late again

Panel 5 – (split into smaller panels) Chris has a quick flashback on his years of training and the changes his body went through.

Narration: I never got my powers so it was easier to blend in, but I never slacked off on my training. at first it was thanks to my father’s influence. But it was after puberty when I noticed I was actually much stronger than your average guy. I had broken the world record for all sprinting distances, I hardly felt tired and my reflexes and dexterity were greatly heightened. After that I had more incentive to stick to my training since

Panel 6 – Chris in a tracksuit/vigilante suit being thanked by old ladies he helped to carry some groceries. And/or Chris standing next to two robbers tied up in front of a gas station.

I believed that to be the cause of my improvement. I also started my vigilante life around that time. My first night out, I helped 2 old ladies across the street. But the second time, I stopped a gas station robbery. It honestly felt good to do good. That’s why I chose the name ‘Unstoppable’ because I believed as long as I kept working to be better, nothing could stop me.

Page 12

Panel 1 – Chris (still in flashback) in his vigilante suit moving through the neighborhood from the rooftops using parkour skills.

Narration contd.: since coming to college, I went through the typical phase of finding myself. I finally decided to put on the mask and try to do some good around my neighborhood. It was rocky at first. No one talks enough about how superheroes maintain their costumes. Well, thanks to that I picked up a few extra handy skills.

Panel 2 – Chris in present day, dressed for school but still using his parkour skills and vigilante route as he’s rushing to class and thinking to himself.

It’s been years since then, and I’m now about to graduate from college. It really almost feels like the blink of an eye. But sometimes, I still get the feeling no matter how much I’m trying to move forward, there’s some things I can never run away from.

Panel 3 – he sees his college a block away

Chris: I guess I’m gonna make it.

Panel 4 – {Caption: later that day} Chris sees his friends from out the window.

Chris: there they go. My best friends, always in a hurry

Chris’ thoughts: I guess my only friends huh

Panel 5 – Chris catches up to his friends

Chris: hey guys

Rae: Oh, hey Chris

Mark: hey

Chris: you guys wanna grab a bite to eat?

Rae: oh, thanks but we have to be home now. its Wednesday. Private lessons

Chris: alright. some other time then

Panel 6 – Chris watches them walk away

Chris’ thoughts: who still uses such obvious lies as ‘private lessons’ even if you are the children of the chairman of Polaris inc. the world’s leading weapons parts manufacturer and currently working with the government on the taskforce weapons division… I wonder if Rae and Mark even know about that.

I’d always felt that Rae and Mark were keeping something from me, and it always felt like a familiar secret. And they are such amazing people I always felt I had to wait till they felt comfortable telling me. But with what I’ve learned about Polaris’ involvement in so many shady activities. I need to know how much Rae and Mark are involved.

Panel 7 – Chris watches from down the street as Rae and Mark’s car enters their gate and drives up the driveway and they both drop off as the driver carries the car out of view to the garage.

I only started investigating quite recently after a bust I made of a gang that was running errands for Polaris to try to get on their good side and benefit from Polaris’ wide umbrella. Lucky for me they also had a lot of inside information of Polaris. they were really tough, but I don’t think those guys were smart, or more like dumb enough to have tried to use it as a bargaining chip. They were just fanboys. Thanks Polaris fan club. *Chuckles

Page 16

Panel 1 – at the docks we see some men loading crates into the back of a van, as others stand watch next to a black Humvee, with guns at the ready

Panel 2 (small panel) – Cloud jumper is camouflaged above the docks, only a slight distortion shows us that they are there.

Panel 2 {big panel) – *inside Cloud jumper*

Mark: the cops are still at least 10 minutes away. And it doesn’t look like they’ll be waiting that long.

Rae: Cloud jumper is built for stealth, so you two keep them busy. I’ll let Base take Cloud jumper home after I find a good perch to back you up.

Mark: I’ll take the guys by the Humvee. You stop those guys loading the cargo.

Chris: got it

Panel 3 – double superhero landing

Panel 4 –

Image - *They are facing off a bunch of guys. Chris facing the guys by the shipping container, Mark facing the guys in the front with the port behind him, and the bad guys with their cars behind them. And Rae on a rooftop with the chopper flying away behind them.

Page 20

Panel 1 – a beam of light is shot at the strong villain’s temple, blowing out his eye and making him scream.

Rae: get your hands off my brother

Panel 2 – strong villain yanks Mark and flings him in the direction the shot came from

Panel 3 – Rae jumps from the stack of containers where she perched to catch mark

Panel 4 – Rae and mark crash into the ground with strong villain standing in front of them as they lie unconscious

Panel 5 – Chris sees this and he’s panicking

Panel 6 – Chris’ face in a black background with the image of his dad attacking his mum in the background (expressing how Chris is flashing back to the scene of his trauma)

Panel 7 - light starts sparking from Chris’ eyes

Page 21

Panel 1 – chris moves to the strong villain so fast its almost like he just appeared behind him, and grabs his head

Chris: LEAVE THEM

Panel 2 – chris flings the strong villain very high into the air before he even knows what happened

Chris: …ALONE!!!

Panel 3 – Chris flies up to him in the air and smashes him into the ground as hard as he can, creating a shockwave from the hit and on impact with the ground.

Panel 4 – Chris lands in front of the large crater strong villain made when he crashed down, with an even deeper hole in the middle where his body was drilled into the ground. But just then he hears sirens.

Panel 5 – He goes over to his two friends and flies off with them on his shoulders.