Proofreading Sample: Before & After

Proofreading Before & After — Demonstration Sample This fictional example was created with AI assistance for portfolio demonstration. It is not a client project and does not represent a client testimonial or outcome. THE BRIEF Proofread a short customer email for grammar, spelling, and punctuation while preserving its friendly tone and original meaning. BEFORE — FICTIONAL DRAFT Hi Jordan, Thank you for you're interest in our workshop. Were excited to welcome you on Thursday, November 12 at 10 a.m. Please brings your laptop and a copy of the registration form. If you have any question's, contact our team before Wensday. We look forward to seeing you their! AFTER — PROOFREAD VERSION Hi Jordan, Thank you for your interest in our workshop. We’re excited to welcome you on Thursday, November 12, at 10 a.m. Please bring your laptop and a copy of the registration form. If you have any questions, contact our team before Wednesday. We look forward to seeing you there! WHAT CHANGED “you're” → “your”: corrected the possessive form. “Were” → “We’re”: added the apostrophe for “we are.” “November 12 at” → “November 12, at”: added the closing comma after the day and date. “brings” → “bring”: corrected the verb in the instruction. “question's” → “questions”: removed an incorrect apostrophe from a plural noun. “Wensday” → “Wednesday”: corrected spelling. “their” → “there”: corrected word choice. The message, event details, and friendly tone remain intact. Heather’s Signature Edits Proofreading • Editing • Resume Support • Virtual Assistant Services