Proofreading & editing your work...
Alessia Marie
These sentences look good to you, don't they?
Sentence #1
We are so excited for our boutique to open up here in Los Angeles, California. We are finally opening up for business on Saturday!
Not so fast. The scariest thing in the world is a word limit. How do we minimize word count? We must cut the clutter. Cutting out redundancies is a huge part of what I do.
Let's take a look at that sentence revised.
Sentence #1 Revised
We are excited to announce our boutique will be open for business this Saturday in Los Angeles!
See what I did there? Same message, less clutter. Your word count will thank you later.
Let me know how I can help!
Alessia Marie 😊
Like this project
Posted Jul 13, 2021
Likes
0
Views
13
