Put the key fact first in your product description.
What would a buyer ask before anything else? Size, fit, what's included?
Answer it in the first line.
The story and details can follow.
What's the first question a buyer asks about yours?
How do you show someone where to look on a busy dashboard?
For a manufacturing platform, we tried two ways. A zooms straight into the real interface and highlights what matters. B steps away from the screen and tells the same idea with a simple visual story.
Which one would make you understand it faster, A or B?