My first question was: if someone lands here with no context, will they know what Relay does before they scroll?From there, I thought about what they’d need to see before taking the next step.
Most landing pages I'm asked to fix have the same problem: they talk about the business before the customer.
The structure I start with for a Framer landing page:
1. Headline: the result your customer wants, in their words
2. Proof right under it: logos, a review or a number
3. The problem you solve, and who it's for
4. How it works, in 3 steps
5. One clear call to action, repeated at the end
If a section doesn't help someone decide, it can probably go.
Launching something soon? Send me a message and I'll sketch the page structure with you.