OET Writing: Choose the Stronger Cardiology Referral OpeningOET Writing: Choose the Stronger Cardiology Referral Opening
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OET Writing taste test: which opening would the cardiologist rather read?
Same fictional patient, same task: a referral for exertional chest pain. Both openings are grammatically fine. Only one does the job the reader needs in the first ten seconds.
Vote A or B, then tell me in the replies what made you choose. Doctors, nurses and OET teachers especially welcome.
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A: history first
B: request first

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