A screenplay can work beautifully on the page in individual moments while still struggling as a complete story.

I’ll read your screenplay from beginning to end as both a viewer and storyteller, then provide detailed writer-facing coverage focused on how effectively the script works as a film or television story.

This is not traditional studio coverage designed to decide whether a screenplay should be purchased. It is developmental coverage designed to help the writer improve the script.

• Complete human-led screenplay read • Detailed written coverage • Story scorecard • Concept and opening assessment • Structure and narrative momentum analysis • Character and character-arc feedback • Stakes and conflict assessment • Pacing analysis • Dialogue feedback • Visual storytelling observations • Tone, exposition, and worldbuilding feedback • Climax and ending assessment • Page-specific reader/viewer reactions • Strengths and weaknesses • Top revision priorities • Draft Stage Assessment • One follow-up clarification question

Your screenplay will receive an overall developmental assessment ranging from:

This is not a prediction of commercial success. It is an assessment of how developed and effective the screenplay currently feels on the page.

Short Screenplay — Up to 30 pages — $65 3–5 page coverage report Estimated turnaround: 3–5 days

Pilot — Up to 65 pages — $105 5–7 page coverage report Estimated turnaround: 4–6 days

Feature Screenplay — Up to 120 pages — $155 7–10 page coverage report Estimated turnaround: 5–7 days

• Full screenplay rewrites • Scene rewriting • Screenplay formatting services • Full synopsis creation • Unlimited post-delivery consultation

I may suggest possible approaches to a problem, but final creative decisions and revisions remain with you.

Please provide:

• Your complete screenplay as a PDF • Page count • Format: short, pilot, or feature • Genre • Draft stage • Any specific concerns you would like me to consider

A synopsis is optional. I can also experience the screenplay without knowing the intended story direction in advance.