Finishing a novel is a massive accomplishment. Figuring out what actually works across the entire manuscript is a different problem.

I’ll read your complete fiction manuscript from beginning to end, first as a reader experiencing the story naturally and then as an editor examining the larger mechanics underneath it.

This service bridges the gap between a traditional beta read and full developmental editing. You’ll receive both a reader-reaction record showing how the manuscript feels as it unfolds and a detailed editorial report explaining the larger patterns behind that experience.

What You’ll Receive

• A complete human-led read of your manuscript • An 8–12+ page polished editorial report • Chapter- or page-based reader-reaction notes • Plot and story-structure analysis • Character arc and motivation feedback • Supporting-character analysis • Pacing and narrative momentum assessment • Dialogue and character-voice feedback • Worldbuilding and exposition observations • Emotional-effectiveness analysis • Continuity and clarity notes • Opening and ending assessment • Five primary revision priorities • One follow-up clarification question after delivery

The goal is not simply to tell you what I liked or disliked. I’ll explain where the story gains momentum, where my investment changes, where confusion or disengagement appears, and what larger revisions could have the greatest impact.

I will not rewrite your scenes or replace your creative decisions. The report is designed to help you understand the manuscript more clearly so you can decide how best to revise it.

Up to 40,000 words — $250 Estimated turnaround: 7 days

Up to 60,000 words — $325 Estimated turnaround: 10 days

Up to 80,000 words — $400 Estimated turnaround: 14 days

Up to 100,000 words — $475 Estimated turnaround: 17 days

Pricing is based on the manuscript's submitted word count, not page count.

• Line-by-line editing • Full proofreading or copyediting • Rewritten scenes or chapters • Direct manuscript rewriting • Unlimited post-delivery consultation

Recurring prose or clarity problems may still be identified when they affect the larger reading experience.