I am a freelance proofreader, ready to help anyone with their novels. I will help you discover what works/doesn’t work in the novel and provide extensive feedback on areas including plot, characters, ending and conflict/resolution.
I will also provide in-line comments of my initial reactions of scenes, to show what it would be like for a general reader to read your novel. These comments could be during sad and emotional scenes, funny scenes, fight scenes, plot twists, etc. This provides more background on what exactly I liked or didn’t like in the novel, coming from the perspective of a reader.