A focused editorial review for fiction writers and memoirists who want readers to understand not only what their characters do, but why they do it.

We look beneath action and plot at the emotional logic driving each character: formative experiences, trauma where relevant, beliefs, fears, needs, coping patterns, relationships, and inner conflict. I assess whether pivotal choices and reactions feel psychologically grounded, then identify opportunities to strengthen motivation, subtext, interiority, and emotional resonance.

You’ll receive detailed character psychology profiles for up to 3 central characters, scene-level feedback on selected key moments, a character arc map, and a practical editorial letter with prioritized revisions. Two consultation calls are included so we can talk through the feedback and your revision direction.

This service provides editorial analysis of fictional characters and memoir narratives. It is not clinical therapy, diagnosis, or legal advice.