I really like the idea and the product itself but just sharing my opinions;
This design itself looks industrial right now to be honest. To make it a bit appealing in the shelf, it has to be designed a little softer especially if its a self-care type of (it looks like it) product. Great work.
Introducing a premium gym water bottle designed for fitness lovers, athletes, and everyday use. With a sleek black finish, stylish design, and durable look, it’s the perfect companion for your workouts, gym sessions, sports, and daily hydration.
Would you pick this off the shelf?
Designed this lemon mint soft drink pack to feel cold, bold, and refreshing at first glance.
Drop a 🔥 if you’d buy it.
Honestly yes, I would pick this up. The condensation and the ice exploding around the can do all the selling, you feel cold before you read a word. The V7 with the lemon-leaf underline is clean too. Is this a personal concept, or were you testing how far you could push a flavour render before a client brief?