I really like the idea and the product itself but just sharing my opinions;
This design itself looks industrial right now to be honest. To make it a bit appealing in the shelf, it has to be designed a little softer especially if its a self-care type of (it looks like it) product. Great work.
I am testing two packaging directions for J0l, a luxury water concept I designed.
On one side, I created a bold, matte midnight blue bottle with gold accents. On the other, I designed a clean, crystal clear glass bottle with silver and teal details.
Which look grabs your attention first? Let me know in the poll below!
I need another set of eyes to check which version works better with this design. The main thought behind this design is the illustration created in the shape of a DNA strand to showcase the brand and how it originated.
Since this is a chocolate product, I personally felt that a more expressive and bold illustration with outlines would be better suited. I would love to hear what you think as a fellow creative.
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