Not all designers have enough courage to post rejected concepts, here's mine π
I understand that it looks too generic, though it looks like what the client was aiming for,
anyways, working on a new concept rn!
The timber-frame lines in the roof make the carpentry read instantly, which is probably also why it felt safe to the client. Was their feedback about the mark itself, or about wanting one more distinctive detail?
Landing page design for Lumo β banking for freelance life
Banks sell control β dashboards, charts, a card floating at fifteen degrees. Freelancers don't want control over their money. They want to stop thinking about it in the gap between sending an invoice and the money landing.
That gap is what the page is built on. The product sits in a meadow instead of on a dark grid, because the promise isn't "manage your finances better" β it's "we handle the part that keeps you up." And the strongest line on the page isn't a feature: no waiting for Monday. Freelancers don't lose weekends to fees. They lose them to timing.
The proof follows the same rule. One freelancer, one number β 4% lost on every international payment. A percentage someone can check against their own account beats any adjective.