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Jesse Harper
• Mar 29
Ever wonder what a professional "MRI" for your manuscript looks like? 🔍
These screenshots are the first three pages of a 130-page structural audit my engine generated for a 600-page epic of my own writing. This isn't just a grammar check—it’s a deep-tissue diagnostic of the story's logic and soul.
What you’re seeing here is the foundation of our work together:
Page 1: The Executive Strategy. We define the core "Truths" of your world and identify the high-level narrative imbalances (like the "Protagonist Identity Crisis" flagged here).
Page 2: The Quick Wins. We clear the technical brush—clichés, passive voice, and readability drift—so we can focus our human energy on the big stuff.
Page 3: The Severity Audit. A line-by-line breakdown of logic gaps, dropped subplots, and character inconsistencies, ranked by how much they threaten your reader's immersion.
The Process: We take this report and use it as our map. We work through it together, line-by-line, ensuring that every "explosive motion" in your story lands exactly where it should.
The Offer: I am currently offering this full "Precision Pass" audit for any manuscript length for just $50 as I build my portfolio.
Ready to see the "ripples" in your own world? Let’s get to work.
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