I provide structured, professional feedback for writers who want clear direction — not vague encouragement.
This service is built for emerging and mid-career creators working in speculative fiction, literary fiction, screen, theatre, or cross-media narrative.
I have four slots for these packages each month.
What you get
Manuscript review (50–180 pages) focused on:
1) Strengths
What’s working
What’s distinctive about your voice
What readers will remember
Where the work already feels “publishable”
2) Development opportunities
Where momentum drops
Structural or pacing issues
Character clarity, flavour dropoff and emotional weight
Worldbuilding coherence (if applicable)
3) What shines — and how to build on it
Specific elements worth expanding
Areas with strong market or artistic potential
Suggestions for next drafts, not just edits
4) What isn’t working as well
Craft gaps
Narrative confusion
Tone inconsistency
Engagement drop-off points
5) Why those issues may be happening
Structural causes
Voice vs. form mismatch
Genre expectation clashes
Draft-stage realities (first draft vs. polish)
You’ll receive a clear written assessment designed to move the work forward — not just critique it.
Format
Reading fee applies for manuscripts 50–180 pages
Delivered as a structured written report
Turnaround based on manuscript length
Optional add-on
30-minute Zoom discussion — available as an upgrade
Use this session to:
clarify feedback
ask craft questions
discuss next steps
plan revisions or submissions
This is collaborative and focused — not a lecture.
Ideal for
Writers preparing submissions
Novella and short novel drafts
Script and hybrid narrative work
Creators building a portfolio
Voice-driven or experimental fiction needing structural support
Indie comic or video game or TTRPG devs who are a bit stuck with the writing
Approach
My feedback balances:
creative instinct
structural analysis
market awareness
voice protection
The goal isn’t to make your work generic — it’s to help it land more powerfully as your work.
Before booking
Please include:
genre
word/page count
draft stage (rough, revised, submission-ready)
what kind of feedback you most need right now
This ensures the assessment is targeted and useful.
I provide structured, professional feedback for writers who want clear direction — not vague encouragement.
This service is built for emerging and mid-career creators working in speculative fiction, literary fiction, screen, theatre, or cross-media narrative.
I have four slots for these packages each month.
What you get
Manuscript review (50–180 pages) focused on:
1) Strengths
What’s working
What’s distinctive about your voice
What readers will remember
Where the work already feels “publishable”
2) Development opportunities
Where momentum drops
Structural or pacing issues
Character clarity, flavour dropoff and emotional weight
Worldbuilding coherence (if applicable)
3) What shines — and how to build on it
Specific elements worth expanding
Areas with strong market or artistic potential
Suggestions for next drafts, not just edits
4) What isn’t working as well
Craft gaps
Narrative confusion
Tone inconsistency
Engagement drop-off points
5) Why those issues may be happening
Structural causes
Voice vs. form mismatch
Genre expectation clashes
Draft-stage realities (first draft vs. polish)
You’ll receive a clear written assessment designed to move the work forward — not just critique it.
Format
Reading fee applies for manuscripts 50–180 pages
Delivered as a structured written report
Turnaround based on manuscript length
Optional add-on
30-minute Zoom discussion — available as an upgrade
Use this session to:
clarify feedback
ask craft questions
discuss next steps
plan revisions or submissions
This is collaborative and focused — not a lecture.
Ideal for
Writers preparing submissions
Novella and short novel drafts
Script and hybrid narrative work
Creators building a portfolio
Voice-driven or experimental fiction needing structural support
Indie comic or video game or TTRPG devs who are a bit stuck with the writing
Approach
My feedback balances:
creative instinct
structural analysis
market awareness
voice protection
The goal isn’t to make your work generic — it’s to help it land more powerfully as your work.
Before booking
Please include:
genre
word/page count
draft stage (rough, revised, submission-ready)
what kind of feedback you most need right now
This ensures the assessment is targeted and useful.