When it comes to line editing, I provide feedback on three main things: Clarity, Consistency, and Conciseness. Whether you are writing nonfiction or fiction, these three things are crucial to consider in order for your book to be written well. Clarity refers to whether each sentence is easily understandable. Consistency refers to ensuring the voice, tone, and style of writing matches throughout the book as a whole. Conciseness refers to removing fluff, repetition, and unwanted rhythm within the writing. When I line edit a book, I provide tracked changes throughout each chapter, as well as giving a short summary at the end of the chapter to highlight anything I thought was done well or needs work. As a full-time writing coach, I have worked with hundreds of writers on their books. You can be confident I will provide you with the same quality and focus to detail as I provided them. :) You won't be disappointed. If you have any questions, feel free to reach out. I look forward to serving you. Best Regards, -Michael Jaymes