I'll read your story and give feedback on:

character motivations

interpersonal relationships

whether dialogue feels natural or contrived

emotional believability of the world-building

I'll also consider the pacing and clarity of the story. You'll receive feedback on anything that feels too fast, too slow, or too confusing.

I won't give feedback on the scientific elements in your story.

You'll receive my feedback as a report divided into the sections outlined above. I'll also leave comments on the manuscript itself.