Pitch Deck Audit — Video Review in 48 HoursSimon Cohen
You've built the deck. You've sent it out. But something's not clicking.
Maybe investors aren't responding. Maybe you're getting meetings but not second calls. Maybe you just have a gut feeling it's not quite right — but you can't pinpoint why.
Here's what I'll do:
I'll record a 15-20 minute video walking through your deck slide by slide. No fluff. Just direct, specific feedback on:
Narrative flow — Does your story build? Is the logic clear?
Visual hierarchy — Are you guiding the eye or creating confusion?
Information density — Too much? Too little? Wrong details?
Credibility signals — Do you look like a real company or a side project?
The ask — Is it clear what you want and why now?
You'll know exactly what to fix — and in what order.
What You Get:
15-20 minute personalized video review (yours to keep)
Slide-by-slide breakdown with timestamps
Priority list: what to fix first
Delivered in 48-72 hours
Price: $350
If you decide to hire me for a full pitch deck redesign, the $350 comes off your project total.
What's included
15-20 minute personalized video review
I'll record a 15-20 minute video walking through your deck slide by slide. No fluff. Just direct, specific feedback on:
Slide-by-slide breakdown
Narrative flow — Does your story build? Is the logic clear?
Visual hierarchy — Are you guiding the eye or creating confusion?
Information density — Too much? Too little? Wrong details?
Credibility signals — Do you look like a real company or a side project?
The ask — Is it clear what you want and why now?
Priority list: what to fix first
You'll know exactly what to fix — and in what order with a detailed list breakdown to help keep everything in order.
Simon's other services
Pitch Deck Audit — Video Review in 48 HoursSimon Cohen
You've built the deck. You've sent it out. But something's not clicking.
Maybe investors aren't responding. Maybe you're getting meetings but not second calls. Maybe you just have a gut feeling it's not quite right — but you can't pinpoint why.
Here's what I'll do:
I'll record a 15-20 minute video walking through your deck slide by slide. No fluff. Just direct, specific feedback on:
Narrative flow — Does your story build? Is the logic clear?
Visual hierarchy — Are you guiding the eye or creating confusion?
Information density — Too much? Too little? Wrong details?
Credibility signals — Do you look like a real company or a side project?
The ask — Is it clear what you want and why now?
You'll know exactly what to fix — and in what order.
What You Get:
15-20 minute personalized video review (yours to keep)
Slide-by-slide breakdown with timestamps
Priority list: what to fix first
Delivered in 48-72 hours
Price: $350
If you decide to hire me for a full pitch deck redesign, the $350 comes off your project total.
What's included
15-20 minute personalized video review
I'll record a 15-20 minute video walking through your deck slide by slide. No fluff. Just direct, specific feedback on:
Slide-by-slide breakdown
Narrative flow — Does your story build? Is the logic clear?
Visual hierarchy — Are you guiding the eye or creating confusion?
Information density — Too much? Too little? Wrong details?
Credibility signals — Do you look like a real company or a side project?
The ask — Is it clear what you want and why now?
Priority list: what to fix first
You'll know exactly what to fix — and in what order with a detailed list breakdown to help keep everything in order.
Simon's other services
$350