Catnip for Readers: Create Captivating First Chapters and Hooks

Michael Davis

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Starting at

$

26

/hr

About this service

Summary

You've heard it countless times: your first chapter determines whether readers turn the page or move on. This can be the difference between a sale or a recommendation. The pressure this creates—worrying over whether you're missing or landing key elements—can stifle your ability to do what you do best: write.
That's why I'm here. I offer comprehensive first chapter evaluations to equip your story with the hooks, character depth, and narrative drive it needs to keep readers rooted to their place (or glued to their phones). With my intuitive acumen and personalized, custom formulas—honed from extensive research and real-world experience—I provide the guidance and actionable feedback you need to keep you and your story going strong.
Together, let's transform your first chapter into a powerful roadmap that conquers common pitfalls and rejuvenates your passion for storytelling by ensuring your story captivates from the very first page.

What's included

  • First Chapter Evaluation and Author Concerns

    I will read the first draft of your first chapter (up to 5000 words, including any prologue) and provide an initial assessment. Additionally, I will address any specific concerns or doubts you have about your chapter. Format: PDF report Content: -Blind read evaluation -Engagement assessment -Character effectiveness -Address specific author concerns (collected via an initial questionnaire) Length: 50-75 words of feedback per 500 words of manuscript Turnaround Time: 3-5 Days.

  • Identifying Weaknesses and Improvement Areas

    A detailed review identifying areas in the chapter that may need strengthening, including where the narrative lost momentum or character actions felt weak. Format: PDF report Content: -Detailed notes on problematic sections -Suggestions for improvement Length: 50-75 words of feedback per 500 words of manuscript Turnaround Time: 4-5 Days.

  • Crafting Strong Hooks and Dynamic Characters

    Based on the initial feedback, I will suggest several types of hooks and provide examples of how to execute them. Additionally, I will outline unique actions for characters to take that make them bold and active. Content: -Hook suggestions and examples -Character action plans -Detailed recommendations for improvements Length: 50-75 words of feedback per 500 words of manuscript Turnaround Time: 5 Days.

Skills and tools

Ghostwriter
Writer
Editor
Google Docs
Microsoft Word

Industries

Publishing
Books

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