You buy this if you are a pre-seed or seed founder sitting on a thirty-slide text dump with no clear story, and you know your ask is buried somewhere in it. Investors often decide early whether your story holds together, and most founder decks fail that test: every fact is present and no narrative connects them. Design-first sellers give you prettier slides; this service gives you the story the slides should be telling. What I deliver: slide-by-slide narrative. I restructure your story arc, rewrite every headline as a claim the slide then proves, rebuild the copy in plain language, and give you speaker notes in your own voice. You also receive a story-arc memo explaining what moved, what was cut, and why, plus a one-line version of your ask you can use anywhere. Premium adds investor outreach email copy. Choose your package: Starter $195: 10-slide narrative restructure, rewritten headlines and slide copy, change log of what moved and why, 1 revision, 4-day delivery. Enhanced $300: 15 slides plus speaker notes plus story-arc memo, 2 revisions, 6-day delivery. Premium $450: 20 slides plus speaker notes plus investor outreach email copy, 3 revisions, 8-day delivery. To get started, send me: your current deck in any format, the ask (raise amount and round), your target investor type, three traction facts I may use (I verify the wording, never invent), your competitor list, and your deadline. Boundaries: content and structure only, no design work. I sharpen your numbers and claims; I never invent traction, revenue, customers, or metrics. Anything that looks invented gets flagged back to you for verification. I work from your real facts and your real voice. Message me before ordering with your project details. I read every message myself, and I will confirm fit and timing before you pay anything. Once we agree the scope, I send a short intake list and your first deliverable ships on the schedule in your package.