Film Script Analysis & Notes

Alyssa Thorne

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Starting at

200

About this service

Summary

I'm a proven television writer who's worked on shows for HBO and Netflix with a background in development. I act as a freelance script editor and consultant on a by-project basis for major production companies. As a writer myself, I remember what it was (and what it took!) to get representation at a major agency, and I have been a finalist in screenwriting competitions such as Screencraft, Acclaim, and the Austin Film Festival.

Process

Initial discussion of your goals. Is this script for competitions? Are you submitting to agents? Are you trying to shoot your script? Are your a producer looking for help giving notes? Whatever your intention, your analysis and notes will be tailored to your needs.

Share your script. For unusually long scripts, rates may differ.

Receive your analysis and improvement plan after allowing time for reading.

FAQs

Is this service only for writers?
No! Whether you're a writer looking to take your script to the next level or a potential producer looking to give high-quality feedback to a writer, script coverage and notes can benefit you.
Will you give me alternate lines, rewrites, or punch-ups?
Although I might suggest a specific line here or there if something jumps out, this service is for notes -- not rewrites, alts, or punch-ups. If you want line-by-line script editing or similarly hands-on services, it'll be a separate process.
Have you done this before?
More times than I can count! I've worked for production companies in LA in television development. I've worked in writer's rooms and written episodes for real shows and both processes require taking and giving script notes -- albeit often in a less formal manner. I currently work as a script editor and consultant for a company in the UK.
What kind of suggestions for improvement will you give?
Overall, I'll highlight areas for improvement, explain why certain aspects are falling short, and offer broad suggestions for elevating the material. This service isn't as granular as line notes or script editing by design, and is best suited for early drafts.

What's included

Script Analysis/Coverage
A detailed analysis of the submitted television script, analyzing its strengths and weaknesses on a structural and artistic level.
Script Notes & Suggestions
Based on the provided evaluation and any stated goals, I'll provide you with specific guidance on how to address weak points, double-down on strengths, and take your script to the next level. From broad areas to keep in mind when re-writing to specific suggestions and pitches, you'll be able to tackle your next draft with confidence.

Duration

1 week

Skills and tools

Screenwriter

Script Writer

Filmmaker